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ElwoodBlues 12-02-2003 08:27 PM

What Have I Done? Part 2: The High Price
 
Part Two:

What Have I Done?

A Sacrificed Friendship

A Passed Up Oppotrunity

A high price to pay indeed
One would think for this price
I recieved the greatest of products
One would be wrong
For this high price I pay
Heartache is bestowed upon me
Churning pains in my stomach
Tears welling in my eyes
Only a maniac would pay
For this sad, sorrowful product

Miles Traveled

Hundreds spent

Yet another high price to pay
Again one would think
I recieved the greatest of products
Once again, One would be wrong
I sacrificed my world
Offered my everything
For the same, sad product
As only a maniac would

I cannot undo what has been done
I cannot change what fate has willed for me


That be part 2 of my heartache. 1 and 3 are floating around somewheres

riptide4070 12-05-2003 05:45 PM

I feel the same way, good poetry and release

J.R.V.A. 12-18-2003 06:36 AM

Nice stuff again, please post more Thanks


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