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Old 11-02-2003, 12:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Common Ground

when she lays down her head
next thing I climb in bed
that's when this love is gonna start
at night

as we travel and search
contours and curves so smooth
light kisses and soft touch
thats how you make your way
to my caring for you so much

so now who will take the lead?
what fun things will we do next?
both in a fresh experience

I don't wanna waste your time
you don't care for a false start
when dealing with matters of the heart
hoping they won't shatter
no one letting tears fall
or drown their misery in alcohol

holding each other on a mountainside
looking forward whilst we're side by side
will these feelings race up or down?
maybe stay moderate on common ground

late night cuddles with sweet nothings
ears to hear, fingers that touch
how is it we seem to care this much?
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Old 11-03-2003, 07:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Thanks for sharing, I enjoy your writing
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
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Old 11-03-2003, 08:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Very good!
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Old 11-04-2003, 05:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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My thoughts on this can't quite get organized, but I can say it is VERY good and I really enjoyed reading it. It's everything!
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Old 11-06-2003, 08:52 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i really like your stuff
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Old 11-10-2003, 09:40 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Quite good, expreses a lot of things, thanks for posting!
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