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06-16-2003, 07:47 PM
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Location: Trapped in the depths of my mind
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Angel: I really like -When You Found Me- It reminded me of what falling in love felt like. Indescribable. Unquantifiable. Deliriously Sweet. You, Angel, have managed to nicely tackled the first one. Your words are truly powerful. Thank you for inspiring visions of beauty, of tranquility, and of love.
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06-17-2003, 03:40 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Thank you all so very much...truly.
I am glad that I can bring a little pleasure to some through my words. It is encouraging. Now if I can get past this BLOCK I have going on! Heh 
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06-19-2003, 08:37 PM
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COMPLETED and A TRAINER
Location: BEAN_TOWN
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Spring has come, the leaves are starting grow much like a child into an adult. Growth, new soil and nurturing, will this new heart to life and in full bloom.
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LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC" "Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad" Quality is for those who know what they want and are at peace with what they have. "S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker |
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06-28-2003, 11:09 PM
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COMPLETED and A TRAINER
Location: BEAN_TOWN
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tick...tick....tick....tick....ring, ring, ring. the alarm off. And I roll over for it one more time, now its time to awaken.
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LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC" "Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad" Quality is for those who know what they want and are at peace with what they have. "S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker |
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06-30-2003, 12:41 PM
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Everything's better with bacon
Location: In your local grocer's freezer.
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"Hollow Echo" really hit home for me, thanks Angel. It has given me pause and enabled me to reflect on things with a bit more distance. Thanks...reading your words always makes me feel like I'm sitting in front of a cozy fire.
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06-30-2003, 05:33 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Thank you all...truly. Your encouraging words inspire me to keep on keeping on. I am in a writers slump of late so they are few and far between, but the words are in my soul, waiting release, and you all help me to strive for it.
*hugs to you all* ~Angel~
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07-01-2003, 06:36 PM
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Location: Canada
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Some really great work here, Angel. "When I Close My Eyes" totally blew me away... just amazing. One of the best things I've read in a long time. I'm only mildly disappointed you're not a professional song writer, since with some simple arrangement, that becomes the next hit of soulfull singer/songwriters everywhere!
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07-04-2003, 09:30 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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My poetry comes from all three of what you mentioned and more.
As far as editting, I tend to do very little. I prefer to keep the raw emotion that comes out as I am feeling it.
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07-23-2003, 09:22 PM
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Insane
Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin
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This latest poem is tremendously beautiful...but if I may say so, I think the rhythm seems a little forced in some lines. Maybe try:
"Relaxing my soul, I need no longer wait" "You released my spirit, opened up my heart" Obviously it can be refined further still, I just wanted to give an idea of what could be done. I don't want to feed lines to you. Aside from those two rhythmic touches, I have to compliment you on your use of rhyme, as well as the sincerity that is in this poem. Kudos to you!
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07-27-2003, 07:51 PM
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COMPLETED and A TRAINER
Location: BEAN_TOWN
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For every personal mountain ones climbs and conquers, many many rocky paths must be crossed. I bet once you reached the peek of your mountain and started to breath that clear air of achievement, harmony followed.
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LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC" "Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad" Quality is for those who know what they want and are at peace with what they have. "S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker |
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07-28-2003, 10:06 AM
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Location: Trapped in the depths of my mind
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Quote:
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08-01-2003, 06:49 AM
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Insane
Location: There's no place like home..
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I can only say that you words reached somewhere deep inside me and touched me. Your writing is so beautiful. It seems that no matter what you write about, you always find a way to express exactly what you want to say. The feelings you express are so true that one cannot help but be touched when reading your words. I can only hope to someday be able to express myself as well as you do.
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08-05-2003, 04:16 AM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Thank you all so very much! I have been away taking some "me" time...hence "Discovery" and this morning I was missing my TFP family so much I had to hop on for a minute. I wish I had time right now to respond to each of you as you all have touched my heart in the words you have expressed to me. I can't tell you how much it means.
I'll try and come "home" a little more often and get something posted here soon. As Always, ~Angel~
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08-05-2003, 07:04 PM
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Everything's better with bacon
Location: In your local grocer's freezer.
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Truly inspiring Angel.
Every time I read your words, I feel like I'm immersed in another world. You truly have a way about you. Thanks for sharing so much of yourself.
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09-23-2003, 12:09 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Ah, and my dear sweet friends seek me. Thank you for thinking of me. I am doing well and my life is more fulfilling than ever.
I haven't written for some time but I feel myself being driven to the pen and paper as of late. Love and contentment of the soul have a way of doing that! I am finding myself pulled here lately and missing all of you. I'll have to get my "significant other" here more often and TFP will have yet another couple on the board and in the family.  Soon... Angel
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09-23-2003, 12:11 PM
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I aim to misbehave!
Location: SW Oklahoma
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Count me in with those that are happy that you are doing ok. I have missed your communications but it is very understandable. I am so glad that you have found some contentment.
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