Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community  

Go Back   Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community > Creativity > Tilted Literature


 
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
Old 06-16-2003, 02:40 PM   #81 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Minx's Avatar
 
Location: Up yonder
As always, beautiful work Angel.
Thanks for the glimpse into your soul
__________________
You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!
Minx is offline  
Old 06-16-2003, 07:47 PM   #82 (permalink)
Insane
 
Location: Trapped in the depths of my mind
Angel: I really like -When You Found Me- It reminded me of what falling in love felt like. Indescribable. Unquantifiable. Deliriously Sweet. You, Angel, have managed to nicely tackled the first one. Your words are truly powerful. Thank you for inspiring visions of beauty, of tranquility, and of love.
__________________
Dream as if you'll live forever.
Live as if you'll die today.

Last edited by TheIceMan; 06-16-2003 at 07:49 PM..
TheIceMan is offline  
Old 06-17-2003, 07:41 AM   #83 (permalink)
Everything's better with bacon
 
SaltPork's Avatar
 
Location: In your local grocer's freezer.
Those were great, Angel. Thanks for sharing them. I always finish reading your work with a "wow".
__________________
It was like that when I got here....I swear.
SaltPork is offline  
Old 06-17-2003, 03:40 PM   #84 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
Thank you all so very much...truly.
I am glad that I can bring a little pleasure to some through my words. It is encouraging.
Now if I can get past this BLOCK I have going on! Heh
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
Old 06-17-2003, 03:42 PM   #85 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
*
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Last edited by Angel; 01-06-2004 at 04:28 PM..
Angel is offline  
Old 06-18-2003, 12:04 PM   #86 (permalink)
rat
smiling doesn't hurt anymore :)
 
rat's Avatar
 
Location: College Station, TX
i cried. alot. your words are so poignant. sigh.
__________________
Quote:
Originally posted by clavus
To say that I was naked, when I broke in would be a lie. I put on safety glasses.
rat is offline  
Old 06-18-2003, 05:41 PM   #87 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
*
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Last edited by Angel; 01-06-2004 at 04:29 PM..
Angel is offline  
Old 06-19-2003, 12:27 AM   #88 (permalink)
Insane
 
Another amazing piece.
__________________
Censorship and thought control can only exist in secrecy and darkness...
a_divine_martyr is offline  
Old 06-19-2003, 08:37 PM   #89 (permalink)
COMPLETED and A TRAINER
 
Location: BEAN_TOWN
Spring has come, the leaves are starting grow much like a child into an adult. Growth, new soil and nurturing, will this new heart to life and in full bloom.
__________________
LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC"
"Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad"

Quality is for those who know
what they want and are at peace with what they have.

"S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker

i8one2 is offline  
Old 06-20-2003, 03:31 PM   #90 (permalink)
Psycho
 
Location: Oregon
I must say I am surprised you like my work, for I am humble beside you.
__________________
"It's not that I don't understand, it's that I don't care"
- Homer Simpson
viveleroi0 is offline  
Old 06-21-2003, 08:01 AM   #91 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
*
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Last edited by Angel; 01-06-2004 at 04:30 PM..
Angel is offline  
Old 06-26-2003, 04:40 PM   #92 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
*
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Last edited by Angel; 01-06-2004 at 04:31 PM..
Angel is offline  
Old 06-26-2003, 10:45 PM   #93 (permalink)
Know Where!
 
MacGnG's Avatar
 
"The heart needs no words, the lyrics that reside are visible through the eyes."

oooh thats good.
MacGnG is offline  
Old 06-28-2003, 11:09 PM   #94 (permalink)
COMPLETED and A TRAINER
 
Location: BEAN_TOWN
tick...tick....tick....tick....ring, ring, ring. the alarm off. And I roll over for it one more time, now its time to awaken.
__________________
LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC"
"Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad"

Quality is for those who know
what they want and are at peace with what they have.

"S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker

i8one2 is offline  
Old 06-28-2003, 11:39 PM   #95 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
A wise person once told me, follow your dreams
__________________
And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

Last edited by J.R.V.A.; 06-29-2003 at 06:14 AM..
J.R.V.A. is offline  
Old 06-30-2003, 12:41 PM   #96 (permalink)
Everything's better with bacon
 
SaltPork's Avatar
 
Location: In your local grocer's freezer.
"Hollow Echo" really hit home for me, thanks Angel. It has given me pause and enabled me to reflect on things with a bit more distance. Thanks...reading your words always makes me feel like I'm sitting in front of a cozy fire.
__________________
It was like that when I got here....I swear.
SaltPork is offline  
Old 06-30-2003, 04:27 PM   #97 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Minx's Avatar
 
Location: Up yonder
As always Angel...very stunning.
Your writing wraps me up and shows me my own heart at times. Beautiful work!
__________________
You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!
Minx is offline  
Old 06-30-2003, 05:33 PM   #98 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
Thank you all...truly. Your encouraging words inspire me to keep on keeping on. I am in a writers slump of late so they are few and far between, but the words are in my soul, waiting release, and you all help me to strive for it.
*hugs to you all*
~Angel~
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
Old 07-01-2003, 06:36 PM   #99 (permalink)
Upright
 
Location: Canada
Some really great work here, Angel. "When I Close My Eyes" totally blew me away... just amazing. One of the best things I've read in a long time. I'm only mildly disappointed you're not a professional song writer, since with some simple arrangement, that becomes the next hit of soulfull singer/songwriters everywhere!

Keep it up!
sarcasmo is offline  
Old 07-01-2003, 07:27 PM   #100 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
Thank you bunches sarcasmo. Coming from one who's own words sing, I am highly appreciative.
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
Old 07-03-2003, 07:10 PM   #101 (permalink)
Upright
 
Does your poetry come with thought and reflection or purely from inspiration?

Also, how much work do you put into editting?
Maya is offline  
Old 07-04-2003, 09:30 PM   #102 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
My poetry comes from all three of what you mentioned and more.

As far as editting, I tend to do very little. I prefer to keep the raw emotion that comes out as I am feeling it.
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
Old 07-22-2003, 03:53 PM   #103 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
*
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Last edited by Angel; 01-06-2004 at 04:33 PM..
Angel is offline  
Old 07-23-2003, 05:11 PM   #104 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
*
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Last edited by Angel; 01-06-2004 at 04:33 PM..
Angel is offline  
Old 07-23-2003, 09:22 PM   #105 (permalink)
Insane
 
Memnoch's Avatar
 
Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin
This latest poem is tremendously beautiful...but if I may say so, I think the rhythm seems a little forced in some lines. Maybe try:

"Relaxing my soul, I need no longer wait"

"You released my spirit, opened up my heart"

Obviously it can be refined further still, I just wanted to give an idea of what could be done. I don't want to feed lines to you. Aside from those two rhythmic touches, I have to compliment you on your use of rhyme, as well as the sincerity that is in this poem. Kudos to you!
__________________
Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang.
Memnoch is offline  
Old 07-24-2003, 02:06 AM   #106 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
Thank you for your comments Memnoch. It is nice to get a little insight from others.
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
Old 07-24-2003, 07:55 AM   #107 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
Your words give me inspiration. You write with a feeling and passion that shines through. Thanks for sharing
__________________
And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
J.R.V.A. is offline  
Old 07-27-2003, 06:56 AM   #108 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Minx's Avatar
 
Location: Up yonder
As usual Angel your words are so graceful and full of feeling. I very much like Discovery. Thanks for the smile you put on my face!
__________________
You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!
Minx is offline  
Old 07-27-2003, 07:51 PM   #109 (permalink)
COMPLETED and A TRAINER
 
Location: BEAN_TOWN
For every personal mountain ones climbs and conquers, many many rocky paths must be crossed. I bet once you reached the peek of your mountain and started to breath that clear air of achievement, harmony followed.
__________________
LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC"
"Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad"

Quality is for those who know
what they want and are at peace with what they have.

"S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker

i8one2 is offline  
Old 07-28-2003, 10:06 AM   #110 (permalink)
Insane
 
Location: Trapped in the depths of my mind
Quote:
Originally posted by Angel
~Discovery~

As the sun bursts over the horizon,
So does my soul burst through its walls.

Released are the demons that held me down,
Freeing me from yesterday’s burdens.

The exhilaration of today leaves me breathless,
Anticipating the melody of tomorrow’s dance.

A gift of new beginnings placed before me,
Received with gratitude and relief.

Finally, the discovery of self, long awaited,
I smile as I am surrounded with peace.
Angel: Thank you so much for these words. They come at a time in my life when the words you wrote sum up my life situation better than I can. Now, all I can work towards and hope for is the final verse..."Finally, the discovery of self, long awaited, I smile as I am surrounded with peace."
__________________
Dream as if you'll live forever.
Live as if you'll die today.
TheIceMan is offline  
Old 08-01-2003, 06:49 AM   #111 (permalink)
Insane
 
Eowyn_Vala's Avatar
 
Location: There's no place like home..
I can only say that you words reached somewhere deep inside me and touched me. Your writing is so beautiful. It seems that no matter what you write about, you always find a way to express exactly what you want to say. The feelings you express are so true that one cannot help but be touched when reading your words. I can only hope to someday be able to express myself as well as you do.
__________________
Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it
Eowyn_Vala is offline  
Old 08-05-2003, 04:16 AM   #112 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
Thank you all so very much! I have been away taking some "me" time...hence "Discovery" and this morning I was missing my TFP family so much I had to hop on for a minute. I wish I had time right now to respond to each of you as you all have touched my heart in the words you have expressed to me. I can't tell you how much it means.
I'll try and come "home" a little more often and get something posted here soon.
As Always,
~Angel~
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
Old 08-05-2003, 07:04 PM   #113 (permalink)
Everything's better with bacon
 
SaltPork's Avatar
 
Location: In your local grocer's freezer.
Truly inspiring Angel.

Every time I read your words, I feel like I'm immersed in another world. You truly have a way about you. Thanks for sharing so much of yourself.
__________________
It was like that when I got here....I swear.
SaltPork is offline  
Old 09-22-2003, 02:52 PM   #114 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
Where are you? I didn't know you were that lost LOL Come back soon
__________________
And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
J.R.V.A. is offline  
Old 09-23-2003, 11:58 AM   #115 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Minx's Avatar
 
Location: Up yonder
Damn it Angel next time you are on pm me girl!
Just to say hello...as we all miss you here!
__________________
You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!
Minx is offline  
Old 09-23-2003, 12:09 PM   #116 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
Ah, and my dear sweet friends seek me. Thank you for thinking of me. I am doing well and my life is more fulfilling than ever.

I haven't written for some time but I feel myself being driven to the pen and paper as of late. Love and contentment of the soul have a way of doing that!

I am finding myself pulled here lately and missing all of you. I'll have to get my "significant other" here more often and TFP will have yet another couple on the board and in the family.

Soon...
Angel
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
Old 09-23-2003, 12:11 PM   #117 (permalink)
I aim to misbehave!
 
rockogre's Avatar
 
Location: SW Oklahoma
Count me in with those that are happy that you are doing ok. I have missed your communications but it is very understandable. I am so glad that you have found some contentment.
__________________
Only two defining forces have ever offered to die for you,
Jesus Christ and the American G. I.
One died for your soul, the other for your freedom
rockogre is offline  
Old 09-27-2003, 01:23 PM   #118 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
*
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Last edited by Angel; 01-06-2004 at 04:35 PM..
Angel is offline  
Old 09-30-2003, 07:50 PM   #119 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
Nice work as always, very touching. Thank you...
__________________
And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
J.R.V.A. is offline  
Old 10-01-2003, 03:26 PM   #120 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
Angel's Avatar
 
Location: Euphoria
Thank you to the King!
__________________


In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
Angel is offline  
 

Tags
angel, poetry, updated

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT -8. The time now is 06:56 AM.

Tilted Forum Project

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.6.0 PL2
© 2002-2012 Tilted Forum Project

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 217 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 240 241 242 243 244 245 246 247 248 249 250 251 252 253 254 255 256 257 258 259 260 261 262 263 264 265 266 267 268 269 270 271 272 273 274 275 276 277 278 279 280 281 282 283 284 285 286 287 288 289 290 291 292 293 294 295 296 297 298 299 300 301 302 303 304 305 306 307 308 309 310 311 312 313 314 315 316 317 318 319 320 321 322 323 324 325 326 327 328 329 330 331 332 333 334 335 336 337 338 339 340 341 342 343 344 345 346 347 348 349 350 351 352 353 354 355 356 357 358 359 360