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Memnoch · 10-14-2003, 06:20 PM

Determined
I march on to the drums of war
Soul's blood spilt
I march on to the drums of war
Battles waged inside my head
I march on to the drums of war
Leaving parts of me for dead
I march on to the drums of war
Severity
I march on to the drums of war
Mercilessly
I march on to the drums of war
Ashamed to see
I march on to the drums of war
Eternity
I march on to the drums of war
Flesh is calling out to me
I march on to the drums of war
Sin is calling lustfully
I march on to the drums of war
Confusion setting in on me.
I march on to the drums of war
I march on determinedly.

riptide4070 · 10-15-2003, 03:03 PM

reminds me of the bad guys in science fiction/fantasy novels

J.R.V.A. · 10-17-2003, 03:13 PM

Very good, Thanks

losthellhound · 10-19-2003, 12:27 AM

Great stuff.. Im usually not a big fan of poetry, but this has a good feel to it.

UglySamuel · 10-19-2003, 07:41 AM

This is a good poem. I like how you repeat that one line over and over. It sets up a good anapestic rhythm. I think it was anapest, anyway. I sometimes get the rhythm names mixed up.

10-14-2003, 06:20 PM	#1 (permalink)
Memnoch Insane Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin	Drums of War Determined I march on to the drums of war Soul's blood spilt I march on to the drums of war Battles waged inside my head I march on to the drums of war Leaving parts of me for dead I march on to the drums of war Severity I march on to the drums of war Mercilessly I march on to the drums of war Ashamed to see I march on to the drums of war Eternity I march on to the drums of war Flesh is calling out to me I march on to the drums of war Sin is calling lustfully I march on to the drums of war Confusion setting in on me. I march on to the drums of war I march on determinedly. __________________ Doing my best not to end up like Kathleen Chang.

10-15-2003, 03:03 PM	#2 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	reminds me of the bad guys in science fiction/fantasy novels __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

10-17-2003, 03:13 PM	#3 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Very good, Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-19-2003, 12:27 AM	#4 (permalink)
losthellhound Thats MR. Muffin Face now Location: Everywhere work sends me	Great stuff.. Im usually not a big fan of poetry, but this has a good feel to it. __________________ "Life is possible only with illusions. And so, the question for the science of mental health must become an absolutely new and revolutionary one, yet one that reflects the essence of the human condition: On what level of illusion does one live?" -- Ernest Becker, The Denial of Death

10-19-2003, 07:41 AM	#5 (permalink)
UglySamuel Upright Location: Over there.	This is a good poem. I like how you repeat that one line over and over. It sets up a good anapestic rhythm. I think it was anapest, anyway. I sometimes get the rhythm names mixed up. __________________ "ROUGH ANAL SEX" -- Shouted at two Mormons on the street by myself