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Harmonia · 10-05-2003, 10:37 AM

The Battle

It courses through my veins,
Day in and day out.
Upsetting the very core of my being,
poisoning my body and mind.
The pain is deep and raw.
The demon rages on...
it eats me from the inside, out.
The battle continues.

Comments (and critiques) encouraged...

ForgottenKnight · 10-05-2003, 10:48 AM

That's a good way to start a poetry thread. I like it.

Harmonia · 10-05-2003, 05:36 PM

Thanks so much, NiceGuy!

So it begins.

Every single word is bitter sweet.
Your dulcet whispers so touching.
Not for my ears. Not for my ears.

Every glace, a wistful stare.
Your eyes, your beautiful eyes.
I see a dark haired angel in them.

Your touch, a rush of yearing.
Every brush of skin a rash of hope.
You cringe yet don't pull away.

A dying flame.
A tiny flicker.
A silence.

It ends.

Comments and critiques encouraged.

Esen · 10-05-2003, 06:07 PM

Yea,
that was a good first puch.
It really grabs ya,
Very nice

Harmonia · 10-05-2003, 06:18 PM

Thanks Chauncy...

Minx · 10-06-2003, 02:01 PM

Moving work Harmonia. We shall look forward to reading more - welcome to the fray!

Angel · 10-11-2003, 03:40 PM

Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
Please post more!

J.R.V.A. · 10-17-2003, 02:48 PM

Nice work, thanks for sharing

Church · 10-21-2003, 05:58 PM

Great stuff. I'm actually studying poetry, and this is great.

10-05-2003, 10:37 AM	#1 (permalink)
Harmonia Upright Location: Minnesota	My poetry (will be updated)... The Battle It courses through my veins, Day in and day out. Upsetting the very core of my being, poisoning my body and mind. The pain is deep and raw. The demon rages on... it eats me from the inside, out. The battle continues. Comments (and critiques) encouraged... Last edited by Harmonia; 10-05-2003 at 11:04 AM..

10-05-2003, 10:48 AM	#2 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	That's a good way to start a poetry thread. I like it. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

10-05-2003, 06:07 PM	#4 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Yea, that was a good first puch. It really grabs ya, Very nice __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

10-06-2003, 02:01 PM	#6 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	Moving work Harmonia. We shall look forward to reading more - welcome to the fray! __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!

10-11-2003, 03:40 PM	#7 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Thank you for sharing yourself with us. Please post more! __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

10-05-2003, 05:36 PM	#3 (permalink)
Harmonia Upright Location: Minnesota	Thanks so much, NiceGuy! So it begins. Every single word is bitter sweet. Your dulcet whispers so touching. Not for my ears. Not for my ears. Every glace, a wistful stare. Your eyes, your beautiful eyes. I see a dark haired angel in them. Your touch, a rush of yearing. Every brush of skin a rash of hope. You cringe yet don't pull away. A dying flame. A tiny flicker. A silence. It ends. Comments and critiques encouraged.

10-05-2003, 06:18 PM	#5 (permalink)
Harmonia Upright Location: Minnesota	Thanks Chauncy...

10-17-2003, 02:48 PM	#8 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Nice work, thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-21-2003, 05:58 PM	#9 (permalink)
Church Tilted F*ckhead Location: New Jersey	Great stuff. I'm actually studying poetry, and this is great.