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Harmonia

10-05-2003 10:37 AM

My poetry (will be updated)...

The Battle

It courses through my veins,
Day in and day out.
Upsetting the very core of my being,
poisoning my body and mind.
The pain is deep and raw.
The demon rages on...
it eats me from the inside, out.
The battle continues.

Comments (and critiques) encouraged...

ForgottenKnight

10-05-2003 10:48 AM

That's a good way to start a poetry thread. I like it.

Harmonia

10-05-2003 05:36 PM

Thanks so much, NiceGuy!

So it begins.

Every single word is bitter sweet.
Your dulcet whispers so touching.
Not for my ears. Not for my ears.

Every glace, a wistful stare.
Your eyes, your beautiful eyes.
I see a dark haired angel in them.

Your touch, a rush of yearing.
Every brush of skin a rash of hope.
You cringe yet don't pull away.

A dying flame.
A tiny flicker.
A silence.

It ends.

Comments and critiques encouraged.

Esen	10-05-2003 06:07 PM

Yea,
that was a good first puch.
It really grabs ya,
Very nice

Harmonia

10-05-2003 06:18 PM

Thanks Chauncy...:)

Minx	10-06-2003 02:01 PM

Moving work Harmonia. We shall look forward to reading more - welcome to the fray! :)

Angel

10-11-2003 03:40 PM

Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
Please post more! :)

J.R.V.A.

10-17-2003 02:48 PM

Nice work, thanks for sharing

Church

10-21-2003 05:58 PM

Great stuff. I'm actually studying poetry, and this is great.

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