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One Night (NiceGuy's Literature Thread)
With thanks to mirevolver for his contribution in the making of the following.
One Night < Removed > Dear freinds, I regret to inform you that my literature here has been removed for personal reasons. I wish for it to not be copied and published as someone else's work. I am thankful for all of the wonderful comments you have posted in response to my literature. I am extremely sorry about this, but I could see no other option. Thank you for your kindness and understanding, ForgottenKnight Once known as NiceGuy |
Living in a Moment
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The Void
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Semi-Random thoughts about One Night at a Club
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Semi-Random thoughts about a Moment.
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Thoughts from a Long Day
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A very nice and detailed look into your mind. Perhaps you should start a journal.
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All I Offer
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You have some good stuff here. I really enjoyed reading these, thank you very much for sharing.
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Thank you for reading my thoughts. I have now started a journal, and though it's not as elegant as my literature, please feel free read it.
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Through your words, I have come to know some of you.
I hope you continue to post in here in addition to your journal. Thanks for sharing. ~Angel~ |
No One Knows
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The Scare
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During an hour drive I focused my thoughts into a short story. When I got back to my place, I tried remembering that story and writting it down. The following is what came out.
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You have some real talent. You should consider some contests.
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im sorry you feel that way. i really am
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The following are some semi-random thoughts I had a few days ago and have yet to share. They're not organized as literture, just as thoughts.
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The following are semi-random thoughts about my life. They are not organized to be literature. They're just my thoughts.
The Observer < Removed > |
The following are more semi-random thoughts, again not organized as literature, but just as thoughts.
The Pain < Removed > |
I came with the hope of perhaps showing you another way to live. i did not come into this in hopes of setting you up to be hurt. You are something to me, but your expectations are trumping what this is. im not intending to fill your mind with illusions of possiblities that are dormant. they have to be. i wont walk away from what ive built other places. you once accepted that, im wondering if you still do. Friendship first. i'd say take it or leave it, but i dont want you to leave. just understand, accept. water off a duck's back.
with rule #1 comes the fine print of no expectations. thats how you get hurt. |
hmnn not sure
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Thank you minyn for your words. They have clearified much. I did as you said last night and prayed, and I followed that with the reading of a small section of the Bible. Today when I awoke, all was clear in my mind. I sat down at work this morning and wrote down the philisophical idea that came to me. I'd share that now, but I don't have time to type it all up, so sharing it with the little segment of the world here at the tfp will have to wait until this evening.
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I lied... sorry... I barely had time to finish typing it before having to go... so now you don't have to wait to read it!
Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain. < Removed > |
its official! i think something wonderful has been tapped in you. never knew an engineer can be such a wonderful and emotional writer. Theres a little artist in everyone?
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I'm a classical renaissance man. |
I have also posted my Manifestations of Reality: a Philosophy about Pain text in a new thread on the Tilted Philosophy board to open it up for discussion. Please feel free to participate in the discussion.
http://www.tfproject.org/tfp/showthr...threadid=30461 |
What can I say? Art runs in my family...
I'm a classical renaissance man. Does it? i would have never guessed with all the engineers running around! |
nerds will rule the world, but artists will make it fun with them =)
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Wow, man! I never thought that I'd find someone else who felt about someone like I did! You wrote EXACTLY how I've felt about a girl for the past four months. Especially "No One Knows".
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Sorry about the wait. I've been really busy lately, and I'm too busy for this as well, but I just had to write and post this collection of thoughts and feelings.
Have you fallen? < Removed > |
This last one sure does tug on the memory strings!
Good work! ;) |
In Candlelight
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life is but a dream, the question is always when you will awaken.
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"you left your mark inside my soul"
my favorite line, love is so sweet but damn if it doesn't hurt |
Will I Survive?
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You will survive. you have thusfar have you not?
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