One Night - Page 2 - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

ForgottenKnight · 10-22-2003, 09:57 PM

I'm soo sorry everyone! I had to edit out much of my literature, and make much of my journal private, for personal reasons. Perhaps sometime in the future I can undo what I had to do today.

ForgottenKnight · 10-25-2003, 12:21 PM

Free Me From Myself

< Removed >

mirevolver · 10-25-2003, 12:28 PM

Though the world can be cruel and cause pain, the raw force of your own life unshielded if left unchecked can be even more devistating to yourself. It sounds like you have taken the first steps to controlling your own raw force.

When you have succeded in that, the world can do it's worst, and you will not be phased by it.

ForgottenKnight · 10-25-2003, 02:59 PM

Seasons of Friends

< Removed >

minyn · 10-27-2003, 01:00 PM

im still sorry for what i've put you through.

ForgottenKnight · 11-02-2003, 10:57 PM

I'm sorry for not posting here in a while, but due to recent circumstances, I no longer feel safe pouring my heart and soul into literature here on the tfp. Until a certain situation is resolved, I may not be posting much literature, if any.

ForgottenKnight · 11-04-2003, 03:58 PM

Nothing To Hold On To

< Removed >

SSJwrestler · 11-06-2003, 08:54 PM

ull always survive, in one form or another

ForgottenKnight · 11-09-2003, 10:32 PM

Unlocking Passion

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 11-09-2003, 10:54 PM

Now within Reach

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 11-09-2003, 11:25 PM

Without You

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 11-16-2003, 12:49 AM

It’s All Been Done

< Removed >

mirevolver · 11-16-2003, 01:03 AM

Ah crap, there goes my lit thread.

ForgottenKnight · 11-20-2003, 02:17 AM

Told Me Not To

< Removed >

taliendo · 11-20-2003, 11:38 PM

You, my friend, are a true poet. I am blessed to have been allowed a peak at such a fine and true heart.

Keep posting, I will surely keep reading -- and don't let anyone stop you from writing, whether or not you feel able to post it or not is another matter.

ForgottenKnight · 11-21-2003, 12:47 AM

Here's another version of the last poem I posted. Amazing how the changing of a few words can change so much in a poem's meaning.

Told Me Not To (Version 2)

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 11-23-2003, 09:00 PM

I wrote this just over a week ago about my walk back to work in the rain. I didn't think it was ready to post, but every time I reread it to try to perfect it, it seemed more and more set without me changing it.

I Keep Walking

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 11-23-2003, 09:04 PM

These three haiku I wrote today for an assignment in my humanities class. I'll see how the class likes them tomorrow. First I'll share them with all of my friends here at the tfp.

< Removed >

< Removed >

< Removed >

taliendo · 11-25-2003, 11:44 PM

I really enjoy the fact that you use repetative lines, it brings a forceful meaning to your work. I can understand how an emotion can be so bearing on your mind/heart that it freely flows again and again -- an answer to every question that your heart could ask.

I enjoyed the haiku's as well. Although the third gave me quite a smile, I would have chosen the second as the best -- your words are well chosen and placed with precision.

ForgottenKnight · 12-01-2003, 07:18 PM

No Guarantees

< Removed >

mirevolver · 12-07-2003, 08:58 PM

*bump*

This is a cool thread, trying to keep it on the first page.

Baricua2782 · 12-09-2003, 01:10 AM

You're poems have truly touched me in a way I cannot describe. I envy your talent to make simple words so powerful.

ForgottenKnight · 12-13-2003, 08:36 PM

Thank you all for your support! It means a lot to me to have touched others with my words!

---------------
Another Haiku I wrote:

< Removed >

---------------
The following poem can be interpreted many ways. The literal sense stands out, but it is written as a metaphore for something that those following my journal my understand.

The Rabbit’s Mistake

< Removed >

mirevolver · 12-13-2003, 09:48 PM

Go pumas.

Angel · 12-16-2003, 07:06 PM

NiceGuy,
Your work is so deep and full. I find it rather amazing how sadness can produce such beauty when penned through poetry. Keep writing those feelings. Not only are you writing great poems, you are doing your soul a service and helping it heal.
~Angel~

ForgottenKnight · 12-17-2003, 12:03 AM

You're responses are always so kind! Thank you, Angel.

Thinking about the kind responses I have recieved here made me go back and finish a poem I had started in late October, but never got around to finishing.

Your Every Word

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 12-19-2003, 09:24 PM

Affairs of Dragons and Wizards

< Removed >

minyn · 12-19-2003, 09:54 PM

nice correlation between potential real life and a game of chess.

carebear · 12-21-2003, 08:15 PM

I have just started reading your literature. I really relate to and admire No One Knows. thanks so much for writing.

ForgottenKnight · 12-23-2003, 06:16 PM

Forsaken

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 01-05-2004, 02:13 AM

Lonely Night

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 01-05-2004, 01:31 PM

Blazing Inferno

< Removed >

taliendo · 01-05-2004, 04:12 PM

I like your cross-over to simplistic diction here. A lot of people (myself included) all to often get caught up in their own words so much that they miss conveying the message the had originally intended. Sometimes less is more.

ForgottenKnight · 01-08-2004, 02:02 AM

Shattered Shield

< Removed >

ForgottenKnight · 01-11-2004, 05:10 PM

Peaceful Mountains

< Removed >

minyn · 01-13-2004, 07:20 PM

CUZ YOURE A DORK! kidding..... midst of conversation with you.

ForgottenKnight · 01-13-2004, 11:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by minyn
CUZ YOURE A DORK! kidding..... midst of conversation with you.

Oh... I see... I've gone from "goon" to "dork" now... I think our friend would respond, "what the f#&k ever..." So I think I'm going to have to quote him on that and make it my response...

ForgottenKnight · 01-14-2004, 01:22 AM

There was a time in which I edited out much of my literature, and changed a few lines in other pieces. After doing this, I said the following.

Quote:

Originally posted by NiceGuy
I'm soo sorry everyone! I had to edit out much of my literature, and make much of my journal private, for personal reasons. Perhaps sometime in the future I can undo what I had to do today.

Now I am ready to put them back up for you to enjoy. I have put back the pieces of literature which I had edited out, and I have changed the lines of a few pieces back to what they were origionally. Now, my literature thread is completely whole agian. Finally, you can see my literature as it reflects my life, and what I have gone through since I started writing on a regular basis and posting my work here.
Please enjoy, and comments about any and/or all of my pieces are always welcomed and appriciated!

Edit: Something was mentioned to me which made me realize that I had to edit out some of my thoughts in order to be respectful towards someone I know. Therefore the works I edited back in may be missing lines.

taliendo · 01-14-2004, 01:46 AM

kudos!

ForgottenKnight · 01-18-2004, 08:35 PM

A Winter Sunset

< Removed >

10-22-2003, 09:57 PM	#41 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I'm soo sorry everyone! I had to edit out much of my literature, and make much of my journal private, for personal reasons. Perhaps sometime in the future I can undo what I had to do today. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 10-23-2003 at 05:50 AM..

10-25-2003, 12:21 PM	#42 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Free Me From Myself < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:26 PM..

10-25-2003, 12:28 PM	#43 (permalink)
mirevolver Inspired by the mind's eye. Location: Between the darkness and the light.	Though the world can be cruel and cause pain, the raw force of your own life unshielded if left unchecked can be even more devistating to yourself. It sounds like you have taken the first steps to controlling your own raw force. When you have succeded in that, the world can do it's worst, and you will not be phased by it. __________________ Aside from my great plans to become the future dictator of the moon, I have little interest in political discussions.

10-25-2003, 02:59 PM	#44 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Seasons of Friends < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:26 PM..

10-27-2003, 01:00 PM	#45 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	im still sorry for what i've put you through. __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

11-02-2003, 10:57 PM	#46 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I'm sorry for not posting here in a while, but due to recent circumstances, I no longer feel safe pouring my heart and soul into literature here on the tfp. Until a certain situation is resolved, I may not be posting much literature, if any. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

11-04-2003, 03:58 PM	#47 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Nothing To Hold On To < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:25 PM..

11-06-2003, 08:54 PM	#48 (permalink)
SSJwrestler Banned Location: Davidson, NC/ Manassas, VA	ull always survive, in one form or another

11-09-2003, 10:32 PM	#49 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Unlocking Passion < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:24 PM..

11-09-2003, 10:54 PM	#50 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Now within Reach < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:24 PM..

11-09-2003, 11:25 PM	#51 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Without You < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:23 PM..

11-16-2003, 12:49 AM	#52 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	It’s All Been Done < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:23 PM..

11-16-2003, 01:03 AM	#53 (permalink)
mirevolver Inspired by the mind's eye. Location: Between the darkness and the light.	Ah crap, there goes my lit thread. __________________ Aside from my great plans to become the future dictator of the moon, I have little interest in political discussions.

11-20-2003, 02:17 AM	#54 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Told Me Not To < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:23 PM..

11-20-2003, 11:38 PM	#55 (permalink)
taliendo Insane Location: an indelible crawl through the gutters	You, my friend, are a true poet. I am blessed to have been allowed a peak at such a fine and true heart. Keep posting, I will surely keep reading -- and don't let anyone stop you from writing, whether or not you feel able to post it or not is another matter. __________________ -LIFE IS ABSURD-

11-21-2003, 12:47 AM	#56 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Here's another version of the last poem I posted. Amazing how the changing of a few words can change so much in a poem's meaning. Told Me Not To (Version 2) < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:22 PM..

11-23-2003, 09:00 PM	#57 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	I wrote this just over a week ago about my walk back to work in the rain. I didn't think it was ready to post, but every time I reread it to try to perfect it, it seemed more and more set without me changing it. I Keep Walking < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:22 PM..

11-23-2003, 09:04 PM	#58 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	These three haiku I wrote today for an assignment in my humanities class. I'll see how the class likes them tomorrow. First I'll share them with all of my friends here at the tfp. < Removed > < Removed > < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:17 PM..

11-25-2003, 11:44 PM	#59 (permalink)
taliendo Insane Location: an indelible crawl through the gutters	I really enjoy the fact that you use repetative lines, it brings a forceful meaning to your work. I can understand how an emotion can be so bearing on your mind/heart that it freely flows again and again -- an answer to every question that your heart could ask. I enjoyed the haiku's as well. Although the third gave me quite a smile, I would have chosen the second as the best -- your words are well chosen and placed with precision. __________________ -LIFE IS ABSURD-

12-01-2003, 07:18 PM	#60 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	No Guarantees < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:17 PM..

12-07-2003, 08:58 PM	#61 (permalink)
mirevolver Inspired by the mind's eye. Location: Between the darkness and the light.	bump This is a cool thread, trying to keep it on the first page. __________________ Aside from my great plans to become the future dictator of the moon, I have little interest in political discussions.

12-09-2003, 01:10 AM	#62 (permalink)
Baricua2782 Insane Location: Boston	You're poems have truly touched me in a way I cannot describe. I envy your talent to make simple words so powerful. __________________ "To know oneself is to study oneself in action with another person." - Bruce Lee, Tao of Jeet Kune Do

12-13-2003, 08:36 PM	#63 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Thank you all for your support! It means a lot to me to have touched others with my words! --------------- Another Haiku I wrote: < Removed > --------------- The following poem can be interpreted many ways. The literal sense stands out, but it is written as a metaphore for something that those following my journal my understand. The Rabbit’s Mistake < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:16 PM..

12-13-2003, 09:48 PM	#64 (permalink)
mirevolver Inspired by the mind's eye. Location: Between the darkness and the light.	Go pumas. __________________ Aside from my great plans to become the future dictator of the moon, I have little interest in political discussions.

12-16-2003, 07:06 PM	#65 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	NiceGuy, Your work is so deep and full. I find it rather amazing how sadness can produce such beauty when penned through poetry. Keep writing those feelings. Not only are you writing great poems, you are doing your soul a service and helping it heal. ~Angel~ __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

12-17-2003, 12:03 AM	#66 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	You're responses are always so kind! Thank you, Angel. Thinking about the kind responses I have recieved here made me go back and finish a poem I had started in late October, but never got around to finishing. Your Every Word < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:16 PM..

12-19-2003, 09:24 PM	#67 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Affairs of Dragons and Wizards < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:16 PM..

12-19-2003, 09:54 PM	#68 (permalink)
minyn young and in bloom Location: under the bodhi tree.... bling	nice correlation between potential real life and a game of chess. __________________ "Woke up this morning with a blue moon in my eye" ~A3 "woke up this morning" "Don't compromise yourself, you're all you've got." -Janis Joplin

12-21-2003, 08:15 PM	#69 (permalink)
carebear Tilted Location: oklahoma	I have just started reading your literature. I really relate to and admire No One Knows. thanks so much for writing. __________________ go cubs!

12-23-2003, 06:16 PM	#70 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Forsaken < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:15 PM..

01-05-2004, 02:13 AM	#71 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Lonely Night < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:14 PM..

01-05-2004, 01:31 PM	#72 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Blazing Inferno < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:14 PM..

01-05-2004, 04:12 PM	#73 (permalink)
taliendo Insane Location: an indelible crawl through the gutters	I like your cross-over to simplistic diction here. A lot of people (myself included) all to often get caught up in their own words so much that they miss conveying the message the had originally intended. Sometimes less is more. __________________ -LIFE IS ABSURD-

01-08-2004, 02:02 AM	#74 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Shattered Shield < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:13 PM..

01-11-2004, 05:10 PM	#75 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Peaceful Mountains < Removed > __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 09-10-2004 at 05:13 PM..