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fallen_angel 09-21-2003 08:31 PM

Remember Me
 
Remember this moment
This here and now
How my hair fell upon my shoulders
How my eyes held yours, hypnotized
Remember my laughter and not my tears
Forget all my worries and never ending fears
My days were beautiful
Like flowers in bloom
Yet, my nights were unbareable
Without your strong careing arms
I'll always remember your smile
How you always try to help others
Dont think you failed with me
Just know and always remember
I cared for you dearly, but
My mind was not my own
Memories filled it to the breaking point
My past left no room for the present or future
I am free now, but I am always with you
So please remember me as I was
And not as I am now
Remember my laughter and playfulness
But most of all just
Remember Me. . .

chavos 09-21-2003 08:41 PM

*sigh....that brought me back to a love that has since wilted and gone away... but you did it so eloquently, that it hurts so good. thank you.

J.R.V.A. 09-30-2003 07:29 PM

Nice, I really enjoy reading you stuff, Thanks

ForgottenKnight 10-01-2003 09:40 PM

Very touching!

*Nikki* 10-05-2003 06:20 PM

You write a lot like me. I really enjoy your work.

Angel 10-11-2003 04:03 PM

I enjoyed this. You write with passion.
Thanks for sharing.
~Angel~

riptide4070 10-15-2003 03:08 PM

angel said "you write with passion." chavos said "that hurt so good."

riptide says "my last and greatest love affects me deeply, your words help to express my then and now."

good stuff!

fallen_angel 10-15-2003 07:03 PM

As much as I apprieciate your words and thoughts, when I wrote this I wrote it as a farewell to a friend who has touched me greatly and whom I did not want to be sad about my passing.
Thankyou for reading and thankyou for making my days brighter


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