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your reflection
I went to leave and I saw your image shimmering there
floating in my own misery, Come to me lift the illusion of your reflection and rise from the water help me turn around let my eyes focus let me see you The feeling of your breath on my shoulders leaves me arounsed but tormented glued to my own frustation my eyes locked onto this puddle washing away all the light lets me stand here watching you figuring you wondering why it is only you I can see oh this poisoned mirror false in my hope I never leave |
Nice, my thoughts excatly.... You seem to have captured a moment in my time. Thanks
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I like the way you create a 'scene' in your poem. I can totally visualize the moment.
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Thanks a lot guys :)
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