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Junkie
Location: Louisville, KY
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Requesting Business Card Critique
So people have been telling me that I really should let my photography do something for me (and maybe even pay for all that gear in the process).
I have no idea how I'm going to do that, but I decided to make a business card to start with. ![]() The back will be plain white, maybe with the black border around the edges. Any tips, suggestions, or constructive criticism would be extremely helpful and welcome ![]() Thanks in advance!
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Junkie
Location: Louisville, KY
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Thanks!
The above image is actually only 32 colors, but yea, I know what you mean. There may be color bleed too. I guess it all depends on the quality of printing... I am considering using glossy paper to print it, which may help preserve the "punch", but the bad thing about glossy paper is - it sucks for writing on! Being able to write on a business card may be actually of a higher priority than vivid colors, though I'm not completely certain yet...
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With a mustache, the cool factor would be too much
Location: left side of my couch, East Texas
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I like it. It looks good to me.
![]() Consider though, that you want to give these things out like candy, to attract business, and for the amount of detail in something to look like that, it will run you mucho dinero to a batch.
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The Dreaded Pixel Nazi
Location: Inside my camera
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good balance, nice design.
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Rawr!
Location: Edmontania
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nice photo, but for a business card, maybe you should go for something a little more upbeat and/or flashy? Of course it all depends on your intended clientelle.
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Please touch this.
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Location: Manhattan
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Make sure the original is 3.5" x 2" and is 300dpi
I used to work at a print shop.. too many people thought we could take a computer graphic that they got off the internet and produce it into a 8x5.. yikes
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Artist and author
Location: Ireland
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Der, actually, I've always done them the same size as a credit card. Is that what Halx is saying? I can't find a ruler with inches on here.
You can get single-sided glossy cards like Astralux (it may be something else where you are). Could even try printing it on a pearl effect. That would make it lift a bit. |
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Insane
Location: Arizona
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I think it's really good. It speaks a lot of your abilities without being flashy.
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Junkie
Location: Louisville, KY
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Thanks for the tips, folks!
(whew, thank god nobody noticed the "digitial photography" typo ![]() The original is in fact exactly 3.5" x 2.0" x 300dpi, so there should be no problems with that. I found a place that will print anywhere between 250 (for $35) and 5000 (for $100) glossy front cards with a custom design. That seems ok to me... Quote:
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You do not use a Macintosh, instead you use a Tandy Kompressor break your glowstick, Kompressor eat your candy Kompressor open jaws, Kompressor release ants Kompressor watch you scream, Because Kompressor does not dance Last edited by Nefir; 08-11-2004 at 04:55 AM.. |
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At the Lemonade Stand
Location: in a theater near you!
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just don't let any typos arise....i got my business cards, letterheads, and envelopes printed and once it was done i realized i put my dads zip code on my moms address...so that was 500 bucks wasted just because of one little thing....
my crit on this card is that it's boring...it doesn't really catch my attention, maybe if you used a picture that occupied more of a stronger design element like space, size, or color...because cutting down colors cuts down cost, and makes things more interesting...just some things to think about.... |
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Junkie
Location: Louisville, KY
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Wah
Location: NZ
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not bad at all ... but what does it look like if you grey the image out slightly? i think white cards (white background, white border) look nicer personally
just tried in GIMP and i can't do it ... dammit ![]()
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Junkie
Location: Louisville, KY
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![]() Here's one with a more stark mix: ![]()
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