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Psivage · 08-09-2003, 06:39 PM

I'm writing a match for a e-fed I belong too. I want to know if this flows good, can visualize it and you get an idea of what is happening. This is a roughdraft, so there will be wrong punctuations.

EDIT: The match isn't over with. Just so you know I didn't end it like that.

Terryman vs. Big LDM

Big LDM is standing in the center of the ring. Terryman comes up to him to offer a handshake before the match. Big LDM looks at the hand, looks at Terryman then backhanded him across the face. Terryman staggered a few steps back. He shook his head, looks to the crowd and shrugs. He walked right back up to Big LDM, and once again offered his hand, once again Big LDM smack him. Terryman walk back once more. He looks down, shakes his head then looks at Big LDM for a third time Terryman offers his hand. Big LDM reeled back to backhand Terryman once more. Terryman drops down doing the splits and hits Big LDM square in the nutsack. Big LDM grabs his nut and bends over. While Terryman is still down he pokes Big LDM in the eyes.

Big LDM temporally blind swings wildly. Terryman grabs Big LDM arm, pulls him to the turnbuckle. Teryman climbs up and hit an arm breaker DDT. Big LDM is down. Taking full advantage, Terryman runs to the rope, bounce off and does a sliding drop-kick to Big LDM face. Terryman was pumped up, he was showing off for the fans at ringside. They were encouraging him on. Terryman climbs to the top turnbuckle he stands up. He is waiting. Big LDM slowly gets up, he looks to his right and left he doesn’t see Terryman. He turns around, see Terryman, Terryman leaps off, Big LDM steps forwards he catches Terryman in mid-flight. He turns it into a powerslam! He hooks the leg, Hugh goes for the count.

1…2…Kickout. Terryman kicks outs. Big LDM with a fist to the head, another one, and one more for the hell of it. Terryman is dazed by the powerslam and the blows to the head. Big LDM picks him up by the hair. Big LDM grab Terryman head. Big LDM with a running charge toward the turnbuckle. Terryman face goes smashing into the top turnbuckle. Big LDM point to a second turnbuckle on the opposite side, running charge, face smash. A third, running charge, face smash. Big LDM point to the opposite, the fourth turnbuckle. Big LDM starts with a running charge toward the fourth and final turnbuckle, Terryman with a back elbow gutshot, Big LDM lets go of Terryman head, Terryman grabs Big LDM head, he runs up the turnbuckle flips over and comes crashing down driving Big LDM head down on the mat face side up. Terryman quickly applies a dragon sleeper on Big LDM. Terryman pushes his knee into Big LDM neck as he leans back. Big LDM close to the ropes, he gets his leg underneath the bottom rope. Hugh makes Terryman release Big LDM.

08-09-2003, 06:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
Psivage Psycho	For wrestling fans. I'm writing a match for a e-fed I belong too. I want to know if this flows good, can visualize it and you get an idea of what is happening. This is a roughdraft, so there will be wrong punctuations. EDIT: The match isn't over with. Just so you know I didn't end it like that. Terryman vs. Big LDM Big LDM is standing in the center of the ring. Terryman comes up to him to offer a handshake before the match. Big LDM looks at the hand, looks at Terryman then backhanded him across the face. Terryman staggered a few steps back. He shook his head, looks to the crowd and shrugs. He walked right back up to Big LDM, and once again offered his hand, once again Big LDM smack him. Terryman walk back once more. He looks down, shakes his head then looks at Big LDM for a third time Terryman offers his hand. Big LDM reeled back to backhand Terryman once more. Terryman drops down doing the splits and hits Big LDM square in the nutsack. Big LDM grabs his nut and bends over. While Terryman is still down he pokes Big LDM in the eyes. Big LDM temporally blind swings wildly. Terryman grabs Big LDM arm, pulls him to the turnbuckle. Teryman climbs up and hit an arm breaker DDT. Big LDM is down. Taking full advantage, Terryman runs to the rope, bounce off and does a sliding drop-kick to Big LDM face. Terryman was pumped up, he was showing off for the fans at ringside. They were encouraging him on. Terryman climbs to the top turnbuckle he stands up. He is waiting. Big LDM slowly gets up, he looks to his right and left he doesn’t see Terryman. He turns around, see Terryman, Terryman leaps off, Big LDM steps forwards he catches Terryman in mid-flight. He turns it into a powerslam! He hooks the leg, Hugh goes for the count. 1…2…Kickout. Terryman kicks outs. Big LDM with a fist to the head, another one, and one more for the hell of it. Terryman is dazed by the powerslam and the blows to the head. Big LDM picks him up by the hair. Big LDM grab Terryman head. Big LDM with a running charge toward the turnbuckle. Terryman face goes smashing into the top turnbuckle. Big LDM point to a second turnbuckle on the opposite side, running charge, face smash. A third, running charge, face smash. Big LDM point to the opposite, the fourth turnbuckle. Big LDM starts with a running charge toward the fourth and final turnbuckle, Terryman with a back elbow gutshot, Big LDM lets go of Terryman head, Terryman grabs Big LDM head, he runs up the turnbuckle flips over and comes crashing down driving Big LDM head down on the mat face side up. Terryman quickly applies a dragon sleeper on Big LDM. Terryman pushes his knee into Big LDM neck as he leans back. Big LDM close to the ropes, he gets his leg underneath the bottom rope. Hugh makes Terryman release Big LDM.