You say you don't write a lot of poetry; however, you seem to have a good command over rhythm and metaphor here. It's a nice piece.
I'm of the opinion that you should probably post more.
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Knowing that death is certain and that the time of death is uncertain, what's the most important thing?
—Bhikkhuni Pema Chödrön
Humankind cannot bear very much reality.
—From "Burnt Norton," Four Quartets (1936), T. S. Eliot
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