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Good story. I was really getting into it, and then this :Speaking of which, we’re crossing the Lake Street Bridge. That is if, only in the case that you care. Should you prefer, insert the name of a bridge near you. This story can take place anywhere.
All you need is a Nick. That might be tough, but I’ll be damned if it ain’t worth it.
Okay. This part is tricky. I’m losing narrative focus. At least I think I am. I’ve brought in a story, made some backdrop, and just gone for a reflective high point. Getting back to the story can be a tough job. Or not…Nick is opening
I liked the story a lot, but I was slipping into it, and then I came back with this. Personally, I didnt like these parts. I would have liked to just get absorbed in the moment. I like it though, thanks for sharing
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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