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Originally Posted by Baraka_Guru
Gotcha! This is a sentence fragment. I suggest recasting it as follows: "Though, if you see me make one, please correct me--just not in a rude manner." The em dash does wonders to one's style, and I think it does well for you here. 
But seriously, nice post. It looks like it shows your personality, which is good. I look forward to more of your posts. |
While technically correct, an occasional sentence fragment could be regarded as a stylistic choice. Perhaps the lady thought that a sentence fragment there was the best way to convey her meaning. A bit of irony, perhaps?
Anyway, welcome to our little corner of the web. We're all a bit odd, so if you're a bit odd as well you'll fit right in.
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I wake up in the morning more tired than before I slept
I get through cryin' and I'm sadder than before I wept
I get through thinkin' now, and the thoughts have left my head
I get through speakin' and I can't remember, not a word that I said
- Ben Harper, Show Me A Little Shame
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