Even without your note prior to the poem, I feel the haggardness - thoughts and ideas bouncing all over. It would be interesting to see what would come without the structure - to see if your writing would mimic the organization of your thoughts.
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna
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