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Old 02-22-2005, 07:40 AM   #5 (permalink)
ratbastid
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Thanks for posting these, animosity. I use FPS too, so I can almost picture how these were made and how they look in the track viewer.

My main feedback is about "Oblivion". I have some feedback for you, but I'm saying this in the context of: I liked this piece very much. This is more like fine-tuning than "what's wrong with it".

Until about 5:20, when the piano outro starts (which is gorgeous), I really was yearning for some more complex rhythms and melodies. The main theme of the piece ("doo-doo-doo-doo doot doot") is nice, but I wanted more complex descant parts. The first few minutes, every single note is right on the beat, and . I wanted some sort of subtle funky drum to come in and break things up. Without that, you risk it sounding plodding or simplistic.

"Final Night" is extremely clever. Very nice work.

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