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Originally Posted by FngKestrel
Haven't had a chance to read through the addition to Cybertooth and your new story, but I wanted to bring something to your attention before the stories got too in depth. Watch out for tense. Like past and present tense usage in the same sections of storyline. Remember to stay consistent. Carry on.  |
I see what you mean. I first wrote CyberTooth last year--back when I was big into the memory style of story telling while this year I prefer using the present tense, as if you are in the action. Thanks.