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Cute lil' couplets for my sister
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12-23-2004, 03:18 PM
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Mephisto2
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Halx
To art and to freedom
To future
without
doubt
C'mon, rip off the paper
and freak the hell out...
Looks good.
Replace the word "without" with "
not
" and it flows better.
Nice touch Hal.
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