I like. It's obviously heartfelt and it's definitely original. It's metric enough to feel lyrical without being so rigorous as to be mechanical.
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"No one was behaving from very Buddhist motives. Then, thought Pigsy, he was hardly a Buddha, nor was he a monkey. Presently, he was a pig spirit changed into a little girl pretending to be a little boy to be offered to a water monster. It was all very simple to a pig spirit."
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