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Oh wow that was fast. Thank you very much. I liked that line too. For a traditional style of rap people thought it was a bit much and they thought it winded on for too long. Probably true but I still like it and I said just about everything I needed to say. I have other raps. I've never thought about posting them though. Maybe I will just so I can have more posts in this forum. I still wanna try writing more poetry though. I feel that in one way or another my raps really are poetry but most people don't feel that way and because of it won't read them in such a way. They'll read actual poetry thats called poetry though. I'm happy to do both if I have to. Thanx again for reading. Tommorow I'm gonna start reading all these posts that have 0 replies and see if I can reply to them. And check the second page for them too. I imagine it has to feel a little empty to post something and have no one feel the need to say anything about it. I can't imagine how far down this old one was.
Asta!!
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"I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project 
It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!  - Asta!!
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