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Originally Posted by K-Wise
What is love?
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I'm personally not a big fan of verse starting with a simple question - simply because it's been done SO many times. I think that it sounds great starting right off the bat with "Love is a 4 letter word that.....". (perhaps spell out four?).
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Originally Posted by K-Wise
Dunno if this qualifies as poetry though...almost borders on being a rant.
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Ranty free verse perhaps?
I like it... Though I can't tell if you're quoting stereotypical things women say or stuff you found in your google search for love? If none of those are linked to the google thing, I would either 86 the google line OR incorporate some of the search results from google that fit in with your "theme" here.
Not much of a critique but I hope this helps some.
