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You might want use the edit button to correct the spelling of: decent, maddness, saddness, consumeing, deamon, and comeing.
The correct spellings are: descent, madness, sadness, consuming, demon, and coming.
I obviously can figure out what you mean, but having to interpret and figure out your spelling takes away from the proper and intended rhythm of the poem. Especially on words like "decent," which are the correct spelling of an entirely different word.
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