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Old 05-27-2004, 02:37 AM   #7 (permalink)
Esen
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Ok, I think I did harribly, but I tried
I posted it so I can see where I went wrong a little mmore clearly.
It was fun to write though.


Strangely we stagger in
False and unattended sin

stench of a spoiled pen
cornered bleeding men

false we ignore them all
crazed uncouth and small
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