A song I wrote for my son - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

Esen · 06-09-2005, 05:42 PM

Hi all,

Well I made a third song! The reason for the explanation point is becasue well the song took me so damn long to make lol but I did get it done ( at least I think so) My 5 year ols son Taylor loves baseball and well he uses his imagination to play it by himself. I figured why not make a song that kind of captures that while making me as an adult use my imagination as well.

I really hope you can find it tolerable

Please feel free to let me know how it sounds.
I am so new at this still and well I understand that I make mistakes, I have no qualms with criticism, please feeel free. I really want to develope eventually one day into a good dj. so that one day when Im gone my son can put on a cd for his friends and say hey this was my dad.

Tha name of the song is Baseball Tay; let me know what you think.

Thanks

Here is the link.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/es...amal_music.htm

zfleebin · 06-10-2005, 12:01 PM

I think its pretty damn good. You have a good flow from beginning to end and fill the sonic space well. The drums are solid and progress in a chill way. Good work look forward to hearing more.

K-Wise · 06-11-2005, 02:38 PM

I can't leave without hearing this. So I'm listening now. I like the samples most of all. The clapping and cheering. I could picture a young boy bouncing around to this and having a great time. It seems you're only getting better. Good luck with this my friend. I think soon I may start on a musical journey myself. Mine is going to be a very long one though. Wish me luck!

Asta!!

Esen · 06-11-2005, 04:21 PM

Thanks Guys!

K-wisw I thikn th elonger the music journey the better

06-09-2005, 05:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	A song I wrote for my son Hi all, Well I made a third song! The reason for the explanation point is becasue well the song took me so damn long to make lol but I did get it done ( at least I think so) My 5 year ols son Taylor loves baseball and well he uses his imagination to play it by himself. I figured why not make a song that kind of captures that while making me as an adult use my imagination as well. I really hope you can find it tolerable Please feel free to let me know how it sounds. I am so new at this still and well I understand that I make mistakes, I have no qualms with criticism, please feeel free. I really want to develope eventually one day into a good dj. so that one day when Im gone my son can put on a cd for his friends and say hey this was my dad. Tha name of the song is Baseball Tay; let me know what you think. Thanks Here is the link. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/es...amal_music.htm __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

06-11-2005, 02:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	I can't leave without hearing this. So I'm listening now. I like the samples most of all. The clapping and cheering. I could picture a young boy bouncing around to this and having a great time. It seems you're only getting better. Good luck with this my friend. I think soon I may start on a musical journey myself. Mine is going to be a very long one though. Wish me luck! Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

06-11-2005, 04:21 PM	#4 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Thanks Guys! K-wisw I thikn th elonger the music journey the better __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

06-10-2005, 12:01 PM	#2 (permalink)
zfleebin Addict	I think its pretty damn good. You have a good flow from beginning to end and fill the sonic space well. The drums are solid and progress in a chill way. Good work look forward to hearing more.