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optik_nerve 01-14-2006 08:50 AM

Some lyrics I had written for a song
 
I just wrote these to throw into a song I had made

This is reality -- don't you fear
I'm here for you now, your saviour is here.
Skies of Darkness and shadows of hate.
We wait together and endure our fate.

Now we're together, you're in my arms.
The Seventh has sounded, one third is gone.
I'm sorry to tell you. I've let you down.
I must be going--
Even I can't save you now.

maestroxl 01-14-2006 04:15 PM

I like it! Especially the last lines.

rlynnm 01-16-2006 12:36 AM

good dose of reality....

msh58 01-16-2006 12:51 AM

i'd lose the first line if it was mine. The rest of it, wow.

optik_nerve 01-18-2006 09:06 PM

Thanks for all the input. :)


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