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Vertigo · 06-03-2003, 08:50 AM

I know i suck but here goes nothing, i wrote it a couple months ago.

the tv flashing in the dark
whispering voices on the background
they are showing themselves off on the screen again
how can they bond with people so easily

the emotion in their voices changes every second
their thoughts are on a different level ,i can hear
just illusions trying to entertain me
all of their mood swings are making me ill
it all comes out in a negative way

what's there to enjoy now?
trying to be as stereo type as they can be
spending money around ,repeating everything, it's all the same , everyday
trying to hard to fit in
thinking about ways to satisfy

it's time for a change
to make it all clear and blend it all together
into one big emotionial program
and i still don't get it ,
it's all just one big ol freak show
ruined at the end

And here's some more to keep it one thread,

knowing there are people
alone by themselves on a new years day
realizing the potential
of something really unique and wonderfull

the creation of something too banal
and hollow to be appreciated by anyone ,

a reflection of myself a personal nature to me
feelings ,the creation of something too banal and hollow
to be appreciated by anyone ,

I expect to be unutterably boring to everyone else but me
this is one of those peculiarly clichéd concepts which people have a tendency to look down upon
average individual end up being little more than a list of favorite songs, or favorites
I never once felt like I truly fit in with my peers
The perplexed expression on my face thus has a dual significance ,

wishing i could crawl out of my black tunnel
The truth is what i seek

J.R.V.A. · 06-03-2003, 07:48 PM

These are real good
I like the feeling

Peetster · 06-04-2003, 07:03 PM

This is the start of something awesome. Put some time into it, refine it a bit. It's good. But you have skill, I think you can make it better.

SaltPork · 06-04-2003, 07:12 PM

Not bad, nice job.

06-03-2003, 08:50 AM	#1 (permalink)
Vertigo Upright Location: yo momma	Television I know i suck but here goes nothing, i wrote it a couple months ago. the tv flashing in the dark whispering voices on the background they are showing themselves off on the screen again how can they bond with people so easily the emotion in their voices changes every second their thoughts are on a different level ,i can hear just illusions trying to entertain me all of their mood swings are making me ill it all comes out in a negative way what's there to enjoy now? trying to be as stereo type as they can be spending money around ,repeating everything, it's all the same , everyday trying to hard to fit in thinking about ways to satisfy it's time for a change to make it all clear and blend it all together into one big emotionial program and i still don't get it , it's all just one big ol freak show ruined at the end And here's some more to keep it one thread, knowing there are people alone by themselves on a new years day realizing the potential of something really unique and wonderfull the creation of something too banal and hollow to be appreciated by anyone , a reflection of myself a personal nature to me feelings ,the creation of something too banal and hollow to be appreciated by anyone , I expect to be unutterably boring to everyone else but me this is one of those peculiarly clichéd concepts which people have a tendency to look down upon average individual end up being little more than a list of favorite songs, or favorites I never once felt like I truly fit in with my peers The perplexed expression on my face thus has a dual significance , wishing i could crawl out of my black tunnel The truth is what i seek Last edited by Vertigo; 06-03-2003 at 08:58 AM..

06-03-2003, 07:48 PM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	These are real good I like the feeling __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

06-04-2003, 07:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
SaltPork Everything's better with bacon Location: In your local grocer's freezer.	Not bad, nice job. __________________ It was like that when I got here....I swear.

06-04-2003, 07:03 PM	#3 (permalink)
Peetster Right Now Location: Home	This is the start of something awesome. Put some time into it, refine it a bit. It's good. But you have skill, I think you can make it better.