A random 'poem' of mine - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

leftyderek · 10-11-2005, 08:44 PM

Hey there! I just want someone to read what I write. There aren't too many people reading my blog so I'll post here- well, it's not like my blog's full of these kinda 'poem's but anyway. Do not them to be good though- I'm barely 19 and I'm not even a native speaker of English. I don't even know if this can be considered as a poem since I'm not too familiar with English literature, in fact, literature(s) in any languages. Anyway. Enjoy.

«hiding behind a daisy petal»

put me in the wooden box
cast seven spells t'seal it tight
my dreams will be my pilot
when they fly me to the moon

sleep me among purple flowers
bring two coins and c'ver my sight
my dreams are now my pilot
and i'm flying to the moon

fly me to the mother moon
come five fairies t'kiss me g'night
my dreams say when night's over
i will be back on the moon

waltz me out of t'wretched world
shed no tears for i'll shine bright
my dreams have brought me hither
the soft cradle of the moon

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J.R.V.A. · 10-12-2005, 04:51 AM

I like it.

You seem to convey the feeling quite well. Thanks for sharing

leftyderek · 10-12-2005, 07:01 PM

Uh, good that someone likes it.

Njah- I only know how to write non-happy stuff. When it comes to sharing happiness I am not too good at it.

10-11-2005, 08:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
leftyderek Crazy Location: Currently Canada. I have been in Norway in the last two years, and in Hong Kong before Norway.	A random 'poem' of mine Hey there! I just want someone to read what I write. There aren't too many people reading my blog so I'll post here- well, it's not like my blog's full of these kinda 'poem's but anyway. Do not them to be good though- I'm barely 19 and I'm not even a native speaker of English. I don't even know if this can be considered as a poem since I'm not too familiar with English literature, in fact, literature(s) in any languages. Anyway. Enjoy. «hiding behind a daisy petal» put me in the wooden box cast seven spells t'seal it tight my dreams will be my pilot when they fly me to the moon sleep me among purple flowers bring two coins and c'ver my sight my dreams are now my pilot and i'm flying to the moon fly me to the mother moon come five fairies t'kiss me g'night my dreams say when night's over i will be back on the moon waltz me out of t'wretched world shed no tears for i'll shine bright my dreams have brought me hither the soft cradle of the moon ------------------------------------------ leftyderek.blogspot.com

10-12-2005, 04:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	I like it. You seem to convey the feeling quite well. Thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

10-12-2005, 07:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
leftyderek Crazy Location: Currently Canada. I have been in Norway in the last two years, and in Hong Kong before Norway.	Uh, good that someone likes it. Njah- I only know how to write non-happy stuff. When it comes to sharing happiness I am not too good at it.