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The5thCandidate · 08-09-2005, 10:14 AM

What is that pounding?
The gulls are excited,
Taking to the darkening sky
They cry, "What!?"
What is it?
I know I'm in the city
And I ought to expect noise
But if the gulls can get upset then
So will I.
Enough of your pounding!
Enough of your pounding!

vonstalhein · 08-09-2005, 02:00 PM

My only suggestion is to keep your poems in one thread, that way i can read them all better. You've come out of nowhere though and i like your stuff, it's fresh.

08-09-2005, 10:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
The5thCandidate Crazy Location: East coast of Canada	Hotel Ibis, Edinburgh What is that pounding? The gulls are excited, Taking to the darkening sky They cry, "What!?" What is it? I know I'm in the city And I ought to expect noise But if the gulls can get upset then So will I. Enough of your pounding! Enough of your pounding! __________________ Muthtard?! Don't let'th be thilly. Lemon, now that'th different...

08-09-2005, 02:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	My only suggestion is to keep your poems in one thread, that way i can read them all better. You've come out of nowhere though and i like your stuff, it's fresh. __________________ No Win No Fee