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Mr. Bungle · 05-28-2003, 12:39 AM

Don't consider myself a poet so bear with me.

This feeling drives me insane
takes me apart piece by piece (day by day)
I have no chance on my own
Only you can save me now
Only you can stop the pain
Can you find it in you to save me once again?
Will you stop this pain?
Pull me from the brink of disaster once more
Or is it to much to ask, have I asked one too many times
Will you just pull me back or will you help me over the edge
With a push, a shove, a smile and a wave.
It all lies in your hands.
Your hopes, you future, your dreams
My hopes, my future, my dreams
So what is your decision?
Will you save me again ?
Or am I to far gone?

xXxEmptyxXx

J.R.V.A. · 05-28-2003, 04:28 AM

Good, you are a poet. I like the emotion in this

Mr. Bungle · 05-28-2003, 07:20 PM

Thanks, I just finally started putting down poetry on paper instead of letting bounce around in my head. Guess this is one of the first poems I've ever written. Aren't I just deprived.

xXxEmptyxXx

Mr. Bungle · 05-31-2003, 11:24 AM

I try to find a reason
As to why I'm still alive
I've persevered so far now
I can mak it until tomorrow
I tell myself this everyday
That this might be the only way
To keep on moving on
While trying to be strong

Angel · 05-31-2003, 12:14 PM

You may not consider yourself a poet, but what I just read was poetry. I certainly hope you continue to place the words on paper. They drove home a lot of emotion.
Good work.

Mr. Bungle · 06-01-2003, 06:26 PM

thanks a lot for your comments

Already it's fading, my favorite memory
Like a handful of sand slipping between your fingers
Leaving just enough behind to remind you of what was
It fades but lasts forever
Like the perfect pair of jeans faded from wear
The perfect note, ink faded read
Again and again, folded and unfolded countless times
Yeah, memories fade, but they were designed that way

Mr. Bungle · 06-02-2003, 09:59 AM

And I love
And I'm lost
wandering
searching
For all of the answers
To the questions I'm afraid to ask
Paranoid
Fearful
Of the blow that is inevitable
Or is it?
If I try to stand up to it again
I am dead
And I am gone

Minx · 06-02-2003, 12:12 PM

I love your work....keep it up, please!

Angel · 06-02-2003, 05:21 PM

Both of these are great work.
The last one drove straight into my reality of my world right now.
Keep 'em coming.

Mr. Bungle · 06-03-2003, 02:53 PM

Meh. Tired. Bad poetry ensues!!!

The phone rings
It's you
A dreary day is brightened
With a surprise
That is the sound of your voice
You bring a smile to my face
Without even trying
Life seems more bearable now

xXxEmptyxXx

Mr. Bungle · 06-03-2003, 07:47 PM

The smile that graces my face
The perspiration on my palms
The nervous chatter before the kiss
The feeling of complete and utter bliss
The feeling of emptiness in my chest
When I'm with you I'm truly blessed
This love for you that burns so strong
Makes me weak in the knees, makes me know no wrong
This remedy that cures all that ails
My love for you, it never fails

xXxEmptyxXx

Mr. Bungle · 06-03-2003, 07:54 PM

How I wish I were the rain
To fall from the sky with out a care
To splash to the ground and feel no pain
To have my fun and die
Then be drawn back up to the sky
A never ending cycle of life and death
To live life fast and have your fun
To know no pain, even when your done
I envy your life and I envy your death
And I'll wish I were you until my last breath

xXxEmptyxXx

Mr. Bungle · 06-05-2003, 07:29 PM

I need to know
What does the future have in store for me
I'm driving myself crazy with these thoughts
I'm killing myself with this frustration
I just need a little more clarity
I just need a little more reassurance
I want this to be right
I need this to be right
Because I never want this to change
I want this to be forever

xXxEmptyxXx

Mr. Bungle · 06-12-2003, 10:03 PM

How long will this last?
Can this be forever?
I can only hope..
Hope that this all doesn't come tumbling down
Like a wooden block tower built to high.
Hope that things will never go sour,
Remaining the same or to only get better
Without this I am lost
Without this I am nothing
Without this I am not
This is what makes me
This is what I live for
To hope and wonder
Lost in a wishful reverie
Filled with all that can be
With all that is me.

Angel · 06-13-2003, 06:26 PM

I absolutely love your versitility!
Not to mention how much I can relate!
Thank you for continuing to post here!

a_divine_martyr · 06-13-2003, 07:41 PM

Well, well, Mr. Bungle.

I really enjoy your work, especially the last one.

Keep up the good work.

Mr. Bungle · 06-14-2003, 08:29 AM

A flash
Searing red
My blood boils
Turning my veins
Into rivulets of
Molten Anger
Disbelief in what you say
Bestfriends are Bestfriends
Can't we just keep it that way?
Thats hard to think
When my fists are clenched
And my teeth are gritting
And its all I can do to stop from hitting
But the hole in the wall
Won't replace the hole in my chest
I don't want to lash out
But thats all I want to do
Is to lash out at you

Mr. Bungle · 06-14-2003, 08:29 AM

thank you all for your kind comments, it is greatly appreciated

Mr. Bungle · 06-19-2003, 09:50 PM

Overpowering
Uncontrollable
Bursting at the seams
This emotion that eats away at me
Is as vast as the seas.
Filling me to the top
Amd replacing what was lost

05-28-2003, 12:39 AM	#1 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	"poetry" Don't consider myself a poet so bear with me. This feeling drives me insane takes me apart piece by piece (day by day) I have no chance on my own Only you can save me now Only you can stop the pain Can you find it in you to save me once again? Will you stop this pain? Pull me from the brink of disaster once more Or is it to much to ask, have I asked one too many times Will you just pull me back or will you help me over the edge With a push, a shove, a smile and a wave. It all lies in your hands. Your hopes, you future, your dreams My hopes, my future, my dreams So what is your decision? Will you save me again ? Or am I to far gone? xXxEmptyxXx

05-28-2003, 04:28 AM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Good, you are a poet. I like the emotion in this __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

05-31-2003, 12:14 PM	#5 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	You may not consider yourself a poet, but what I just read was poetry. I certainly hope you continue to place the words on paper. They drove home a lot of emotion. Good work. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

06-02-2003, 12:12 PM	#8 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	I love your work....keep it up, please! __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!

06-02-2003, 05:21 PM	#9 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Both of these are great work. The last one drove straight into my reality of my world right now. Keep 'em coming. __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

05-28-2003, 07:20 PM	#3 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	Thanks, I just finally started putting down poetry on paper instead of letting bounce around in my head. Guess this is one of the first poems I've ever written. Aren't I just deprived. xXxEmptyxXx

05-31-2003, 11:24 AM	#4 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	I try to find a reason As to why I'm still alive I've persevered so far now I can mak it until tomorrow I tell myself this everyday That this might be the only way To keep on moving on While trying to be strong

06-01-2003, 06:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	thanks a lot for your comments Already it's fading, my favorite memory Like a handful of sand slipping between your fingers Leaving just enough behind to remind you of what was It fades but lasts forever Like the perfect pair of jeans faded from wear The perfect note, ink faded read Again and again, folded and unfolded countless times Yeah, memories fade, but they were designed that way

06-02-2003, 09:59 AM	#7 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	And I love And I'm lost wandering searching For all of the answers To the questions I'm afraid to ask Paranoid Fearful Of the blow that is inevitable Or is it? If I try to stand up to it again I am dead And I am gone

06-03-2003, 02:53 PM	#10 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	Meh. Tired. Bad poetry ensues!!! The phone rings It's you A dreary day is brightened With a surprise That is the sound of your voice You bring a smile to my face Without even trying Life seems more bearable now xXxEmptyxXx

06-03-2003, 07:47 PM	#11 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	The smile that graces my face The perspiration on my palms The nervous chatter before the kiss The feeling of complete and utter bliss The feeling of emptiness in my chest When I'm with you I'm truly blessed This love for you that burns so strong Makes me weak in the knees, makes me know no wrong This remedy that cures all that ails My love for you, it never fails xXxEmptyxXx

06-03-2003, 07:54 PM	#12 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	How I wish I were the rain To fall from the sky with out a care To splash to the ground and feel no pain To have my fun and die Then be drawn back up to the sky A never ending cycle of life and death To live life fast and have your fun To know no pain, even when your done I envy your life and I envy your death And I'll wish I were you until my last breath xXxEmptyxXx

06-05-2003, 07:29 PM	#13 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	I need to know What does the future have in store for me I'm driving myself crazy with these thoughts I'm killing myself with this frustration I just need a little more clarity I just need a little more reassurance I want this to be right I need this to be right Because I never want this to change I want this to be forever xXxEmptyxXx

06-12-2003, 10:03 PM	#14 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	How long will this last? Can this be forever? I can only hope.. Hope that this all doesn't come tumbling down Like a wooden block tower built to high. Hope that things will never go sour, Remaining the same or to only get better Without this I am lost Without this I am nothing Without this I am not This is what makes me This is what I live for To hope and wonder Lost in a wishful reverie Filled with all that can be With all that is me.

06-13-2003, 06:26 PM	#15 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	I absolutely love your versitility! Not to mention how much I can relate! Thank you for continuing to post here! __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

06-13-2003, 07:41 PM	#16 (permalink)
a_divine_martyr Insane	Well, well, Mr. Bungle. I really enjoy your work, especially the last one. Keep up the good work. __________________ Censorship and thought control can only exist in secrecy and darkness...

06-14-2003, 08:29 AM	#17 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	A flash Searing red My blood boils Turning my veins Into rivulets of Molten Anger Disbelief in what you say Bestfriends are Bestfriends Can't we just keep it that way? Thats hard to think When my fists are clenched And my teeth are gritting And its all I can do to stop from hitting But the hole in the wall Won't replace the hole in my chest I don't want to lash out But thats all I want to do Is to lash out at you

06-14-2003, 08:29 AM	#18 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	thank you all for your kind comments, it is greatly appreciated

06-19-2003, 09:50 PM	#19 (permalink)
Mr. Bungle Upright	Overpowering Uncontrollable Bursting at the seams This emotion that eats away at me Is as vast as the seas. Filling me to the top Amd replacing what was lost