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Cared enough...
I thought you cared enough
I thought I cared enough too and maybe we did If you stopped and I hadn’t or I stopped and you hadn’t this never would have happened It’s odd how the last thing we did together wasn’t together at all. ~me I usually don't write stuff like this... but it felt good to get stuff on paper last night. |
It's good when it feels good - almost feels like writing in the moment, and both the writer and the reader come to the same conclusion together. Thanks for sharing!
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True to the heart. The best thing about poetry is that there are universal experience, unique to us all somehow, and still pull you remember. ;) Good stuff.
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'It’s odd how the
last thing we did together wasn’t together at all.' I like stanzas like this, a little cryptic, a little ironic, quite touching, and all the more satisfying. McGough esque. |
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