01-21-2005, 05:18 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Junkie
Location: At my daughter's beck and call.
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Poety to my ex
My girlfriend recently broke up with me due to my alcoholism and drug addictions (and the behaviour that usually accompanies the disease). I am in a treatment center for 80 days. Here is the poem I wrote for her when I first fell in love;
Out of my darkness I saw you arise With the fire in your soul Mirrored by thy brown eyes For all the years I've Spent twisting in the wind You have released me From all of my sins Now free, let's laugh and dance let's engage in sweet romance Things are better, I'm 20 days clean. Drugs and alcohol DO NOT help creativity, they stifle it. Diatribe ended.
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01-21-2005, 05:41 PM | #2 (permalink) |
Oh dear God he breeded
Location: Arizona
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Good work. On the poem and 20 days. It's a hard struggle, but keep at it. it will be worth it in the end.
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Bad spellers of the world untie!!! I am the one you warned me of I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant. |
01-21-2005, 05:51 PM | #3 (permalink) |
Chilled to Perfection
Location: Dallas, TX
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Excellent work, soulful, deep, and descriptive
Congrats on staying clean. Hang in there. Its one step at a time.
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