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Eowyn_Vala · 05-02-2003, 09:13 PM

All consuming, these feeling pouring through me.
I don't know where to turn,
I am so confused, knowing not what to do.
Rage and passion flaming brightly,
jealousy and pride, keeping me from admitting
cetain truths that hurt to much.
I am yours and you don't want me!
I am consumed, engulfed in so many feelings:
hatred, love
happiness, anger
sorrow, passion
but the deepest one is betrayal!
I feel so betrayed by you.
You take what you want from me and
without looking back you just break away,
Almost as if I meant nothing,
what we shared meant nothing at all.
You are on a path of self-destruction,
and you are destroying so much in your path including me
and so many other friends, so many other people.
My dreams no longer move me,
they no longer offer the solace they once did.
So silently I will cry knowing that in every end there is a beginning
knowing that I have yet to find my new beginning.
It is so hard to imagine a beginning without you.
I am so consumed by you that I can barely breathe,
let alone think or to even try to imagine anything!

Realizm · 05-03-2003, 08:29 AM

Feeling the pain, sharing the thoughts helps I hope.

scarebearjinx · 05-03-2003, 04:15 PM

i'm touched. wonderful writing.

forgotten_dream · 05-03-2003, 07:07 PM

Amazing work, as usual. I'm impressed by the beauty and power of your words.

Talk to the person. They might feel differently than you think--they may not be looking for a new beginning yet either.

riptide4070 · 05-05-2003, 07:09 PM

I don't know what to say.....I share your pain because I've been going through something similar for months now. New beginnings are everywhere, don't stop looking. Even though you feel you have lost everything, you must keep at least a shred of hope.

Baileys · 05-16-2003, 12:47 PM

oh wow.

This is so what I am going thru right now. What is possible is mindblowing and he walked away because he is scared of falling in love (?).

Now I am falling apart.

J.R.V.A. · 05-18-2003, 05:48 AM

I like the way you write. This was a very moving piece for me. Thanks for sharing

Minx · 05-21-2003, 12:01 PM

Parts of this hit so close to home it's frightening. Very moving work, thanks.

05-02-2003, 09:13 PM	#1 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	Consumed All consuming, these feeling pouring through me. I don't know where to turn, I am so confused, knowing not what to do. Rage and passion flaming brightly, jealousy and pride, keeping me from admitting cetain truths that hurt to much. I am yours and you don't want me! I am consumed, engulfed in so many feelings: hatred, love happiness, anger sorrow, passion but the deepest one is betrayal! I feel so betrayed by you. You take what you want from me and without looking back you just break away, Almost as if I meant nothing, what we shared meant nothing at all. You are on a path of self-destruction, and you are destroying so much in your path including me and so many other friends, so many other people. My dreams no longer move me, they no longer offer the solace they once did. So silently I will cry knowing that in every end there is a beginning knowing that I have yet to find my new beginning. It is so hard to imagine a beginning without you. I am so consumed by you that I can barely breathe, let alone think or to even try to imagine anything! __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

05-03-2003, 07:07 PM	#4 (permalink)
forgotten_dream Psycho	Amazing work, as usual. I'm impressed by the beauty and power of your words. Talk to the person. They might feel differently than you think--they may not be looking for a new beginning yet either. __________________ "A ouija board just works better if you've made it yourself. It's sortof like how 'Clue' is more interesting when one of you has actually killed someone."

05-05-2003, 07:09 PM	#5 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	I don't know what to say.....I share your pain because I've been going through something similar for months now. New beginnings are everywhere, don't stop looking. Even though you feel you have lost everything, you must keep at least a shred of hope. __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

05-16-2003, 12:47 PM	#6 (permalink)
Baileys Tilted Location: if you want to know, you'll ask	oh wow. This is so what I am going thru right now. What is possible is mindblowing and he walked away because he is scared of falling in love (?). Now I am falling apart. __________________ Baileys

05-18-2003, 05:48 AM	#7 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	I like the way you write. This was a very moving piece for me. Thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

05-03-2003, 08:29 AM	#2 (permalink)
Realizm Insane Location: A fuzzy cloud.	Feeling the pain, sharing the thoughts helps I hope.

05-03-2003, 04:15 PM	#3 (permalink)
scarebearjinx Psycho Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.	i'm touched. wonderful writing.

05-21-2003, 12:01 PM	#8 (permalink)
Minx Junkie Location: Up yonder	Parts of this hit so close to home it's frightening. Very moving work, thanks. __________________ You've been a naughty boy....go to my room!