Autumn grows a chill - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

tecoyah · 10-23-2004, 06:47 AM

Scented as if a deep shade of Amber
Autumn grows a chill
Too short a season, this time of transition
Breeding woodsmoke in childrens’ hearts
Wind making teary eyed squints
Cooling the Earth with summers’ permission
Waiting for winter to start
Deep in my throat, like sucking on mints
Parched summer landscape, deep in remission
The pattern of leaves fall apart
This icy wind only hints
A new smell of blue tinted frost
Withering trees as if ill
Autumn grows a chill

K-Wise · 10-27-2004, 01:29 PM

Great piece. I love the imagery here. I enjoy Winter more than other seasons so naturally I enjoy Autumm as well.

Asta!!

10-23-2004, 06:47 AM	#1 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Autumn grows a chill Scented as if a deep shade of Amber Autumn grows a chill Too short a season, this time of transition Breeding woodsmoke in childrens’ hearts Wind making teary eyed squints Cooling the Earth with summers’ permission Waiting for winter to start Deep in my throat, like sucking on mints Parched summer landscape, deep in remission The pattern of leaves fall apart This icy wind only hints A new smell of blue tinted frost Withering trees as if ill Autumn grows a chill __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

10-27-2004, 01:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	Great piece. I love the imagery here. I enjoy Winter more than other seasons so naturally I enjoy Autumm as well. Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!