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Call me Apollo, for I will pull the sun across the sky
to see the light touch your face. Call me Neptune, for I will stop the tides to bathe with you, if only for a moment. Call me Aries, for I will end all wars so you may never again see a drop of blood. Call me Hades, for I will stop the flow of the river Styx so you and I will never part. undefinedundefinedundefined |
Great first post! Welcome to the Literature Thread :)
That was a really creative idea to use the greek mythology in your poem- I could really see each of those mental images :) |
not bad, I'd love to see more depth in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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