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pan6467 · 07-12-2004, 08:33 AM

Daylight slowly deadens to black
Another day past to never look back

Sweat drips in and burns my eyes
As the darknes envelopes blue skies

Colder now creatures in bed
While visions of evilness dance in their head

Vampires come out seeking a nights prey
From those too weak to get away

Addicts get home from work and smile as they get high
All the while darkness controls the sky

Creatures of the night dig through garbage cans for food
The moon will help them find something good

But at darkness's peak
All may seem bleak

The sky starts to change back to light
Another day starts and at least for today light has won the fight

tecoyah · 07-12-2004, 08:39 AM

Interesting ....I like the full circle trip thru the night.

pan6467 · 08-05-2004, 11:05 AM

Woke up at half past ten
Looked to see if you'd been home
Looks like another day alone again
Talking to each other on the telephone

Looking out my window as I drive through town
Seeing couples walking hand in hand
Brought back times when you were around
But now we seem to live in different a different land

You keep accusing me of making life misery
And I close up like a clam letting feelings drown
We're together yet we live our lives so seperately
The future is an unknown road we have to go down

We may end or be stronger than ever
It's a 50/50 shot as long as we try
But blaming each other will never put us back together
And love will surely die

pan6467 · 08-06-2004, 01:06 PM

Sitting here thinking of you
Wondering what is left to do

Do we part ways
And not share our days

Or do we end the madness and admit our love to each other
And work to be together

What do we say when we're scared of the future
And what the other wants we are unsure

Who do we need to become
Or do we just need to get numb

Do we need to bury feelings deep
And not let the other see us weep

Or can we find ways to open our heart
And tell the other we don't want to live a part

How do we move forward and show each other our love
And how do we know it is enough

How do we get back into each other's arms
And lose ourselves in each others charms

I guess it all depends on the trust we have for each other
That in the end will bring us together

riptide4070 · 08-24-2004, 04:54 AM

I like the first poem although it seemed as if there wasn't enough talk of hope and the "light." Next you wrote of some troubling issues with love. Love is tough but I find it best to never give up on it no matter which form it comes in.

07-12-2004, 08:33 AM	#1 (permalink)
pan6467 Lennonite Priest Location: Mansfield, Ohio USA	Pan poetry Daylight slowly deadens to black Another day past to never look back Sweat drips in and burns my eyes As the darknes envelopes blue skies Colder now creatures in bed While visions of evilness dance in their head Vampires come out seeking a nights prey From those too weak to get away Addicts get home from work and smile as they get high All the while darkness controls the sky Creatures of the night dig through garbage cans for food The moon will help them find something good But at darkness's peak All may seem bleak The sky starts to change back to light Another day starts and at least for today light has won the fight __________________ I just love people who use the excuse "I use/do this because I LOVE the feeling/joy/happiness it brings me" and expect you to be ok with that as you watch them destroy their life blindly following. My response is, "I like to put forks in an eletrical socket, just LOVE that feeling, can't ever get enough of it, so will you let me put this copper fork in that electric socket?"

07-12-2004, 08:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Interesting ....I like the full circle trip thru the night. __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

08-05-2004, 11:05 AM	#3 (permalink)
pan6467 Lennonite Priest Location: Mansfield, Ohio USA	Woke up at half past ten Looked to see if you'd been home Looks like another day alone again Talking to each other on the telephone Looking out my window as I drive through town Seeing couples walking hand in hand Brought back times when you were around But now we seem to live in different a different land You keep accusing me of making life misery And I close up like a clam letting feelings drown We're together yet we live our lives so seperately The future is an unknown road we have to go down We may end or be stronger than ever It's a 50/50 shot as long as we try But blaming each other will never put us back together And love will surely die __________________ I just love people who use the excuse "I use/do this because I LOVE the feeling/joy/happiness it brings me" and expect you to be ok with that as you watch them destroy their life blindly following. My response is, "I like to put forks in an eletrical socket, just LOVE that feeling, can't ever get enough of it, so will you let me put this copper fork in that electric socket?"

08-06-2004, 01:06 PM	#4 (permalink)
pan6467 Lennonite Priest Location: Mansfield, Ohio USA	Sitting here thinking of you Wondering what is left to do Do we part ways And not share our days Or do we end the madness and admit our love to each other And work to be together What do we say when we're scared of the future And what the other wants we are unsure Who do we need to become Or do we just need to get numb Do we need to bury feelings deep And not let the other see us weep Or can we find ways to open our heart And tell the other we don't want to live a part How do we move forward and show each other our love And how do we know it is enough How do we get back into each other's arms And lose ourselves in each others charms I guess it all depends on the trust we have for each other That in the end will bring us together __________________ I just love people who use the excuse "I use/do this because I LOVE the feeling/joy/happiness it brings me" and expect you to be ok with that as you watch them destroy their life blindly following. My response is, "I like to put forks in an eletrical socket, just LOVE that feeling, can't ever get enough of it, so will you let me put this copper fork in that electric socket?"

08-24-2004, 04:54 AM	#5 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	I like the first poem although it seemed as if there wasn't enough talk of hope and the "light." Next you wrote of some troubling issues with love. Love is tough but I find it best to never give up on it no matter which form it comes in. __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'