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Old 08-05-2004, 05:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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So ya wanna know me?

This is dedicated to everyone!
There has always been a time, when you have had enough and wish you could "speak your mind".
This poem was inspired by all the crap we put up with in our daily lives. From Politics to Media to Special Interest Groups to Religious Nuts standing at our door preaching their shit. To ex lovers, bad bosses and maybe a family member or neighbor that rides your ass over everything.
Read it and I bet you can think of someone to read this poem too.
Post a comment if you agree.


“So, ya wanna get to know me?”

So ya think wanna get to know me huh?
You think you can approach me?
Do I look like someone who needs an incompetent acquaintance?
You might want to think again!

I don’t wanna hear about your stupid ideas!
I don’t wanna hear how fuckin great you think you are!
I don’t wanna listen to your juvenile advice!
And I don’t wanna tell you lie’s to make you feel better about your pathetic life!

You don’t want to hear it? Then do not fucking ask for my opinion!
Don’t come around here like I owe you anything!
I would rather beat ya to a bloody fuckin’ pulp, then look at ya!
This is my fucking corner of the world….not yours!

No I don’t think you’re cute!
No, I don’t think you’re smart!
No, I don’t like your fucking retarded kids and they’re not precious!
And not to mention, your hair style went out with the Beach boys!

You’re a sorry piece of existence!
What ever made you think I would want to know you?
Do you see my eyes? Does it look like I’m joking?
Keep smiling motha fucker and you’ll receive yours!

So don’t even look at me or turn your head, you scum !
You see me comin’ you better turn and go the other way!
I would trust you are getting the message I am sending.
So…….. ya still wanna know me?

KTH-aka Dawson70
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Old 08-07-2004, 05:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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No, never said I wanted to know you. never will.
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Old 08-08-2004, 01:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I know this is a little raw. It is not really my persona. I just sometimes feel like venting, but I guess I have too much respect for people in general to ever say this. It's just a poem.
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Old 08-08-2004, 06:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Pretty awesome. I can picture someone just coming off with that and the other person standing there in tears.

Pretty powerful stuff.
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Old 08-09-2004, 07:24 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hmmm...did you get out your 'angry eyes' for that one ?

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Old 08-10-2004, 06:21 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Dawson70...that may really be your picture, as you have told me...but I'm bettin you are an old sweetie pie under all that fur. But if I am wrong, "fur" be for me to say so!
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Old 08-11-2004, 09:12 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally posted by unoaman
Dawson70...that may really be your picture, as you have told me...but I'm bettin you are an old sweetie pie under all that fur. But if I am wrong, "fur" be for me to say so!
The Alpha Male Wolf...........Thats the name of the pic on my Avatar.
Yes.......to people in the pack.....Dawson70 is a big puff mellow. All TFP'ers are in the pack right?
Outside the pack or try to do harm to any one in the pack...............Grrrrrrrrrrrr.....snarl...............*chomp*
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Old 08-14-2004, 03:52 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Dawson, thank God my suspicions were right...as you can see, I'm just an old "dog" trying to keep up with the pack. I'm not much of a fighter, but I'm a barkin mother...........
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Old 08-18-2004, 09:04 AM   #9 (permalink)
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venting through words, very cool. I know the feeling as well and I'm sure everyone can relate. My new roomate has a punching bag and we vent on it about everyday! But I still write to vent as well.....
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