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fishin · 07-22-2004, 06:17 AM

THE IMMACULATE ABYSS

I reckon that words cannot suffice
To express what truly dwells beneath
A picture can tell a thousand words
But one too few for true release

Breathe.

Somewhere deep within lies untapped dreams
The mezzanine of the soul - release.
Trapped in the silent space between now and then
Forever enclosed in the immaculate abyss.

Release.

matthew330 · 07-22-2004, 06:59 AM

hehehe.l.... cool poem fishin,

fishin · 07-23-2004, 04:03 AM

Thanks. Please post comments.

ForgottenKnight · 07-23-2004, 09:33 PM

Excellent!

Keep releasing yourself through great writting!

07-22-2004, 06:17 AM	#1 (permalink)
fishin Crazy	The Immaculate Abyss THE IMMACULATE ABYSS I reckon that words cannot suffice To express what truly dwells beneath A picture can tell a thousand words But one too few for true release Breathe. Somewhere deep within lies untapped dreams The mezzanine of the soul - release. Trapped in the silent space between now and then Forever enclosed in the immaculate abyss. Release. __________________ liberals rule. phhtt.

07-22-2004, 06:59 AM	#2 (permalink)
matthew330 Banned	hehehe.l.... cool poem fishin, Last edited by matthew330; 07-22-2004 at 07:03 AM..

07-23-2004, 04:03 AM	#3 (permalink)
fishin Crazy	Thanks. Please post comments. __________________ liberals rule. phhtt.

07-23-2004, 09:33 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Excellent! Keep releasing yourself through great writting! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"