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Old 05-29-2004, 09:08 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Location: the western part of new york
ten lines of silence

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feel the essence of life flow through your veins
as the silence pierces the darkness

-=tekno=-
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Old 05-30-2004, 03:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Took me a minute of thought.....but thats what makes this work.

Damn...my head hurts.
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Old 05-31-2004, 12:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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inspired by the first 12 tracks of the old korn cd....

did you know people actually make "silent song" cd's and people buy them.?
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Old 06-05-2004, 01:14 AM   #4 (permalink)
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*Silence*
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Old 06-07-2004, 11:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Location: Following the light...
That's a creative approach to poetry! Made me think as well.
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Old 06-08-2004, 10:08 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Location: france
Too damn hectic for me; where's my whalesong and waterfall cd?
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Old 06-10-2004, 11:40 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Location: Where You Live.
There's not a lot you can say about poems like that :P (geddit?)

I like the sentiment of silence piercing the darkness...i sometimes get that feeling. When i'm in bed and i suddenly realise it's quet. Lovely!
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Old 06-12-2004, 11:01 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Very very cool.... I enjoyed this a lot
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