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Old 05-02-2004, 12:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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two poems i wrote, see if you can understand what they're about

hey all. these are two poems i wrote just off the fly. i know what they mean, i'm just curious as to see what others might think they mean. thanks
here are the poems:

<b>a summoned close</b>
if rue becomes wry within those maybe a close is summoned.
if closure leads desire it is a while they'll dance in sure certainty
of more variability to the trite things we clearly see

<b>illusions</b>
in quaint illusions saints revealed
quietly washing worldly posh revered
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Old 05-02-2004, 11:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: Where You Live.
beats me. pretty though.
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Old 05-06-2004, 01:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
The first one is breaking up is hard to do
The second one is religion is phony
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