Fireshiru1

hey all. these are two poems i wrote just off the fly. i know what they mean, i'm just curious as to see what others might think they mean. thanks
here are the poems:

<b>a summoned close</b>
if rue becomes wry within those maybe a close is summoned.
if closure leads desire it is a while they'll dance in sure certainty
of more variability to the trite things we clearly see

<b>illusions</b>
in quaint illusions saints revealed
quietly washing worldly posh revered

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No matter how hard you try, you can't baptize a cat.

vonstalhein

beats me. pretty though.

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No Win No Fee

J.R.V.A.

The first one is breaking up is hard to do
The second one is religion is phony

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart