04-21-2004, 08:16 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Crazy
Location: Sydney, Australia
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Some English Similie Poem Work
It isn't near done or anything.. but it's really my second piece of work this year (i've been really slack) - whatta ya think? - I think it's all over the place anyway:
Wind gently blowing in my face Like a dark, and cold place Waves collapse and crash Like hammers, they bash My hands shake, my fists clench I walk away and sit on a bench Suddenly, lightning strikes Bolts of power stream from the sky I wonder to myself, am I about to die? Like a beast that knows it’s been caught No use to try and fight, I’ve been bought Like a helpless soul that has no escape Here I am, With the last few moments of my life My life flashes before my eyes Like a horrible nightmare it hits Suddenly I’ve realized something isn’t right I close my eyes and it slowly fades to white All hope and inspiration gone I’ve left a few wounds behind Like a video that’s on rewind My life goes back through it’s past tracks I can’t go back, it has to end now I know I’m lost it was at my own cost The earth starts to shake It’s not an earthquake The ground starts to split Light coming from the gaps It was all setup, a trap People narrow mindedly, plan my demise Now I’m stuck in a place, with out a face Like that person you never really knew Wake up to yourself, it’s you |
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english, poem, similie, work |
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