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Old 04-18-2004, 09:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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analog haiku...

My universe gone
I collapse inside my pain
My heart grows weaker

gave my love away
my thoughts were always of her
i weep for my loss

I stop every day
and mourn my stupidity
God, please forgive me

He gave me the love
and I was a fool with it
now I am empty.....
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Old 04-19-2004, 01:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice haiku's. I really like the third one. So true in everyones sense.
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Old 05-10-2004, 09:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hang in there Ana, you will be writing happy haikus before you know it. Damn well done, btw.
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Old 05-26-2004, 03:08 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Very well set, pointed and complete, excellent work
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Old 05-26-2004, 10:51 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Damn dude, that was good.
It's simple, yet effective.
I'd love to see more.
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Old 05-26-2004, 11:39 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I adore haiku,
Short sweet and right to the point,
Give us four more please?
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