analog

My universe gone
I collapse inside my pain
My heart grows weaker

gave my love away
my thoughts were always of her
i weep for my loss

I stop every day
and mourn my stupidity
God, please forgive me

He gave me the love
and I was a fool with it
now I am empty.....

matteo101

Nice haiku's. I really like the third one. So true in everyones sense.

eyeronic

Hang in there Ana, you will be writing happy haikus before you know it. Damn well done, btw.

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tecoyah

Very well set, pointed and complete, excellent work

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WarWagon

Damn dude, that was good.
It's simple, yet effective.
I'd love to see more.

SixEdxMia

I adore haiku,
Short sweet and right to the point,
Give us four more please?

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