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Memnoch 04-10-2004 10:58 PM

I could never
 
I am fading from this world
And I don't ever want to look back
I can't find you in this world
I don't ever want to look back

Pain is so unreal to me
I can't see the blood that flows
Serenity is apathy
I have ceased to grow

I could never see
This synergy
Of you and me
I could never be
Never be
Never see

I have plunged head first
Into the waters of complacence
I am drowning in
A sea of tears as I awaken

I will never know
Your touch of love, your touch of longing
I will never know
A sense of caring, of belonging

Sadness fills my memories
Tainted by my enemies
Taken from me violently
Emotionless I shield my eyes.

ForgottenKnight 04-12-2004 08:05 PM

I know how you feel. Thanks for putting it into words.

ariekitten 04-18-2004 01:57 AM

that isnt a poem, its a song. well its both. that has an awesome rhythm, you should put some music to it.....:)
thx for sharing

Esen 04-19-2004 02:55 PM

Yea. I must agree, it would make a great ssong as well as a poem :)

Memnoch 04-19-2004 05:59 PM

Ariekitten and Chauncey - thanks so much for the suggestion...I just plucked out a pretty decent tab on my bass for the song! It sounds pretty decent.


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