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Darkness
The noises of the daylight quietly slip away
Only to be replaced by the sounds of the night They float gently around me The darkness is my solace. The night air flows around me Darkness creeping close to me The light shows too much, is impersonal The darkness is my lover. I stride out into the darkened streets And see that there is no one around me Alone I am master of all that I see The darkness is my kingdom. |
nice poem. i know how you feel.
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Hmmmm. I like it, but the darkness is cold too. Cold and lonely. There is nothing wrong with darkness but sometimes you need light too. Just don't let the darkness swallow you (or anyone else!) whole.
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encompassed in darkness. A safe place at times. a time to find oneself. Nice work.
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I pictured a man living in a cave that goes for solitary walks at night. Very nice work...
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