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Old 05-03-2003, 06:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Location: Boring ass KS
Shadows of a Rose

Like shadows passing through
the sands of time
First wish,
Your kiss,
A first bitter taste of wine.
Hold me close and sweet tonight
I'll drink me to my grave
Upon your lips my heart ascends
Another round unmade
Blush and roses heartless thrills
My heart to thee I swear
Your breath is soft upon
My cheeks
Your kisses taint them fair
I drink unto you my
sweet intoxication
I'm drowned within your eyes
As I look into you I see my
Reflection blink wise
But as I reach the bottom of your
soul our searing kiss will end
And I'll grow cold upon empty
Heartbeats
Without you
My lover- my friend
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Old 05-06-2003, 12:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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YOu suprise me daily. I knew you had it in you but now i know you truely realize your potential.
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Old 05-07-2003, 08:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: Boone, NC
Your descriptiveness is breathtaking. Maybe I'll try to match your skills, but I don't think I have it in me.
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Old 05-07-2003, 04:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
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Whew! That was beautiful.
Thank you!
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