Mephex

My first attempt here at the TFP.
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fuck love

fuck love, i mean it, cuz it's true
i have no pain, really, i left it all with you

your bittersweet, half-smiles of girlish wishing
my using of your heart, passionless, selfish kissing

you have done for me, what i never knew one could
i told you it wouldn't work, though in my heart it would

the droplets of our love, absorbed in those puffs of white
littering your floor, so often, almost every night

so fuck love, and all it's supposed to mean
i know now, that true happiness, is only found in dreams.

i am past what was us, and i'm anxiously waiting to snip the last string
i must tell you though, i cannot wait for our next fling

the emotional attachment is gone now, leaving my empty heart to cool
but it really is quite exciting, knowing that i'd been so so cruel

i am liberated, free, and once again back on the hunt
but please, let me thank you for last weekend, so hot and warm back inside your

fuck love

losthellhound

great stuff. I havent enjoyed poetry that much in a long time..

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Mephex

Thanks, it felt good

Dixie

yea, that was nice. and i can definitely relate.

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scrappmittens

Sounds like my life.....thanx

ForgottenKnight

Nice. Thanks for sharing!

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losthellhound

Im bumping this because it deserves to be seen by all the newer people we have here..

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"Life is possible only with illusions. And so, the question for the science of mental health must become an absolutely new and revolutionary one, yet one that reflects the essence of the human condition: On what level of illusion does one live?"
-- Ernest Becker, The Denial of Death

Dawson70

Good Lines. I could totally picture those as song lyrics.
Maybe by Metallica or Emiem?
Good Poetry. I enjoyed it.

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Yippie Ki Ya...

KellyC

refreshing approach and style, i very much like the last stanza, you know....

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