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Old 07-05-2003, 03:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I Don't Miss You.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss having you in my world.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss not being able to speak to other girls.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss never knowing what you're up to.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss telling you I love you.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss you not saying what was on your mind.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss feeling beneath you all the time.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss being treated like a child.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss making you smile.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss feeling safe from harm.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss you being in my arms.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss actually NOT feeling completely black.
I don't miss you.
Please come back.
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Old 07-05-2003, 05:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
Inspired by the mind's eye.
 
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Location: Between the darkness and the light.
Yeah, been there before.
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Old 07-07-2003, 01:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the ending and the contradiction throughout.
Nice work!
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Old 07-07-2003, 02:32 PM   #4 (permalink)
The Cheshire Grin...
 
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That's like the poem in the movie '10 things I hate about you'
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Old 07-07-2003, 04:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Never seen it, but I've seen The Taming of the Shrew in the theatre, although I'm sure they're nothing alike.
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Old 07-07-2003, 04:38 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Different. Nice rhythm going there.
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Old 07-07-2003, 08:41 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I like it! A lot! Been there too! I didn't like it much! But I do like how you expressed it!
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Old 07-08-2003, 06:09 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thank you. I like this a lot
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Old 07-08-2003, 09:31 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I've said it before, I'll say it again: Love is a joke with no punch line.

That was very good Crow. I hope we all get to see more of your work soon.
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Old 07-08-2003, 09:36 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I just went through that a few days ago. . . Wouldnt it be nice to just know who you should be with

best wishes
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Old 07-09-2003, 06:45 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Been there... there now... moved on...
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Old 07-16-2003, 12:52 PM   #12 (permalink)
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haha, that was great. Soooo been there. And back. And there. And back. Hmmmmm.
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Old 02-13-2004, 04:38 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I don't miss not having read this poem,
I'm just kidding, I love it just as much as ocean foam!
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