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SaltPork · 01-27-2004, 07:54 PM

If you have the time
could you please pass the butter
my toast is so dry.

ForgottenKnight · 01-27-2004, 08:42 PM

Creative!

I hate to break it to you, but that's not technically a Haiku. Haikus are technically about nature. When it's not about nature, it's called something else (similar name), but I forget what it's called. I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone only knows them as haikus anyways. Just thought I'd let you know.

SaltPork · 01-28-2004, 11:43 AM

I see butterflies
why aren't they good on toast
they are so crunchy

Is that better? butterflies are nature

ForgottenKnight · 01-28-2004, 03:38 PM

Are butterflies good on anything?

SaltPork · 01-28-2004, 08:06 PM

the grass is long, damp
it stands so straight, tall and proud
I must cut it now

Ah, nature.....breathe deep
the fury of my loins grows
I must go pee now

How are those NiceGuy? Better? Trying to stay within the technical specifications of Haiku

ForgottenKnight · 01-28-2004, 09:15 PM

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Originally posted by wrkime
How are those NiceGuy? Better? Trying to stay within the technical specifications of Haiku

Those are funny! I don't think you need to stay within the technical specifications as long as you have fun writing it! I do enjoy reading it!

01-27-2004, 07:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
SaltPork Everything's better with bacon Location: In your local grocer's freezer.	a ridiculous haiku If you have the time could you please pass the butter my toast is so dry. __________________ It was like that when I got here....I swear.

01-27-2004, 08:42 PM	#2 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Creative! I hate to break it to you, but that's not technically a Haiku. Haikus are technically about nature. When it's not about nature, it's called something else (similar name), but I forget what it's called. I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone only knows them as haikus anyways. Just thought I'd let you know. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

01-28-2004, 11:43 AM	#3 (permalink)
SaltPork Everything's better with bacon Location: In your local grocer's freezer.	I see butterflies why aren't they good on toast they are so crunchy Is that better? butterflies are nature __________________ It was like that when I got here....I swear.

01-28-2004, 03:38 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Are butterflies good on anything? __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

01-28-2004, 08:06 PM	#5 (permalink)
SaltPork Everything's better with bacon Location: In your local grocer's freezer.	the grass is long, damp it stands so straight, tall and proud I must cut it now Ah, nature.....breathe deep the fury of my loins grows I must go pee now How are those NiceGuy? Better? Trying to stay within the technical specifications of Haiku __________________ It was like that when I got here....I swear.