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Old 01-07-2004, 02:20 PM   #1 (permalink)
Psycho
 
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
short thoughts

You are the fading memory
That my mind cannot forget
The taste that lingers on my tongue
A caress that brands the skin
Your movements are like shadows
Dancing in my mind
Moving the gentle breeze
Into a hurricane of despair
Bringing the scent of loss and sorrow to the air

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Make believine isnt hard alone
Niether are drying the tears I've never shown
These are just the things that happen
When I am reminded of you
As I close my eyes so I can be with you
All of my memories are too painful to forget
They are the stains on my soul
Melting my wings
As I become one with the sun
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel
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Old 01-07-2004, 10:16 PM   #2 (permalink)
Jesus Freak
 
Location: Following the light...
Again, beautiful work.

I really like these lines:
Quote:
Originally posted by fallen_angel
Moving the gentle breeze
Into a hurricane of despair
Bringing the scent of loss and sorrow to the air


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Old 01-13-2004, 08:10 PM   #3 (permalink)
Addict
 
Location: Boone, NC
memories of past love can hurt. My pains usually come back whenever I see a picture of my lost love smiling.
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Old 01-14-2004, 10:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
Psycho
 
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
I see mine everyday in class. Its hard not to look or stare but sometimes its all i can do to stay sane.
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel
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Old 02-07-2004, 10:13 AM   #5 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
You write very beautifully
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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