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Old 04-19-2003, 09:24 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Rogue work


My mind as keen
As a razor’s edge
My heart is large
And full of hope
My feet are fleet
They will carry me far
My shoulder and arm
Are broad and strong
That will carry my woe
But, before me I behold...
Soft Cheek
Soft Hair
Soft Eyes
Soft Lips
So Fair...
Will you be my Lady?


This was never dedicated to anyone in the past.
Just something that came to me when I was searching.
I'm hoping I've found that someone.

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Old 04-19-2003, 09:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Well, here I stand
Thinking, Dreaming
Wondering about you
And its astounding
For its what I always do

And while I fly
Drifting in clouds so high
Dreaming about you
That bright light at some great height
knowing that its you

Watching me float
Fishes ‘neath a majestic boat
Plants with hypnotic sway
Its mind numbing this way
Just wondering about you

And should I go space-walking
The stars twinkling, talking, whispering
Crying out loud about someone I know
And in the silence
Still thinking about you; I go
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Old 04-19-2003, 09:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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To Create and Destroy
One hand birthing
The other annihilates
Are we the hand of God
All three of the fates

With fire, water, earth and air
We make and unmake, both ugly and fair
Spinning a web of weight through time
So awesome, delicate yet terrible
Dancing with no reason nor rhyme

They must love us; hate us so
To give us this task
And in our genius and ignorance
Our successes we crow
Our failures we mask

In the end, if there is such
Will we destroy ourselves
Or like the gods, make by touch
Ever is the movement, flow and dance
Of those that can make or take us by chance


Dedicated to Earth Day

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Old 04-19-2003, 09:38 AM   #4 (permalink)
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<center>


For Both of Us

I am in pain
I am in Love
I am not alone
But feel lonely
Close, yet so far
Why not together
It is unfair
Wanting to share
But not to be returned
Being intimate
But no togetherness
A friend that hides
And sees one way
Wanting to care for
But pushed away
I am in love
I am loved
But not shared
Not understood
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Old 04-19-2003, 09:40 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Mariah

You see a sky with misty rose and yellow
As wisps of white clouds and blue lay above and
The dark grey hills cut across below

You feel the morning cold upon your breath
As if knowing the sun will soon arise with gold
The warmth of your companion beneath soothes

You feel the strength of her stride
As she guides you among the rough tree bark
The crackle of the leaves under her hooves

You see the steam from your breath and hers
As you glide along together in synch
The dream from the night let you alone know

That her name reflects the dawn
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Old 04-19-2003, 09:43 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Warmth

On the floor with a blanket over our laps
Glasses chiming together filled with wine
In front of us, crackles a cozy fire
Being so close satisfies our desire

In a green field with quiet trees and soft breeze
A blanket with food covers a few budding flowers
Laying down together, watching the blue sky
As our thoughts, feelings and visions fly

On a beach with soft light fading
Sun briefly accenting the dark waves
Walking aside each other,our toes covered with sand
Just wandering slowly hand in hand

At a dark wooden table set for feasting
Family and friends talk all around
As a cooked bird comes, greeted with smells and sighs
I gaze across the table into your wonderful eyes

I can’t imagine a year without you
Your warmth
Our warmth
Our love burns forever
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Old 04-19-2003, 11:05 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Absolutely breath taking as usual. Beautiful work Rogue.
I see a glimmer there.... Nice to see it.
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Old 04-20-2003, 04:57 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Dark Migration


Imagine
Dark upon dark
Driving the desert
Beams shining on nothing
Far from people
No signs, no homes, no lights
I am numb, fading…
Suddenly, Sounds
Jarred to attention
Aware of rumbling
Auto is jostling
A flat; no, what
Before my lights, now
Hundreds, Thousands
Bodies upon bodies
A river of rodents
Crossing my path, my road
Surreal; what to do
Stop, NO
My mind has visions
The bodies crawling
Climbing into crevasses
Myself waiting with horror
Drowning inside under many
Keep Going, Keep Going
My soul wants to halt
My heart wants to ride
Heart over soul; this time
The sounds continues
The jarring continues
Crushing; one to many
One over many; this time
Suddenly, Nothing
I am Numb, Alert.
No signs, no homes, no lights
Far from people
Beams shining on nothing
Driving the desert
Dark upon dark
Can you imagine


Yes, this was real.
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Old 04-20-2003, 04:59 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Bosses


Selfish as hell
Yell real well
They do as they please
Your bonus; a tease
Try as you might
They’ll do what they like

Your time, not theirs
Promises, just words
Their vision, not yours
Always meeting with bores

Management; what’s that?
Sit around getting fat.
Organization; where’s this?
Rather bug you ‘bout a piss

They don’t know your job
But they think they do
That’s odd
You’re replaceable, they say
But you know, if they do
They’ll pay

What I want to know
How’d they get the position?
Cause everything is show.
With them, there’s no fruition

Shocked, when they see
The resignation from me
We didn’t know you were unhappy
You, we adore
They crow, as you’re out the door
And with smile, you think.
What a whore.
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Old 04-20-2003, 05:03 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Steady


Steady
Despite the Chaos
Walking with Purpose
Time moving quick
No thought
Just doing
And it's all right
Future rushing at me
No End near
And it's all right

Before
I was fearful
I was crazed
But I Stood
I moved
I worked
With no Design
I moved
I worked
With Time flowing

And now
Despite the Turmoil
Seeing with Instinct
Not stronger
Not proud
Not quick
But
Steady
Curious
For a Man Who Thinks
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Old 04-20-2003, 05:04 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Take My Hand


Take my hand
Lead me to love
I go willingly
However
There’s none to lead
On my own
Stumbling
Wandering
False Paths
And Cul de Sacs
Someone
Must find me
Do they know
Where I am
Here
But none hears
Here
None sees
Ironic
Before them I stand
Open
But they pass by
Through me
But I feel them
Oh, I know them
Don’t they know
Can’t they feel
Don’t they see
Can’t they listen
Hollow sounds
Words
Illusionary actions
Visions with no substance
None to love
None to take my hand


I might be past this...hmm, we'll see.
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Old 04-20-2003, 07:33 AM   #12 (permalink)
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A peek inside the lonely heart.

I hope you are indeed past this.
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Old 04-20-2003, 09:45 AM   #13 (permalink)
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That was beautiful. I love lonely sad writing, it is so easy to feel the emotion.
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Old 04-20-2003, 02:37 PM   #14 (permalink)
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I can't say much about this, other than "Very cool." and "I like it."
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Old 04-20-2003, 03:47 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Very cool,
[insert Bohemian poetry Appreciation Snapping of fingers here]
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Far across the western ocean I must wander

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Old 04-21-2003, 08:16 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Thank you, Angel.
I appreciate it.
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Old 04-21-2003, 02:28 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Location: Utah
Nice
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Old 04-22-2003, 06:43 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Alone, naked, and sad I was and have been.. The mirror can tell the truth, If I had just listen..A long time ago! sure People had touched me and I let then see my mirror, but they were never able to get too deep within my soul, I wouldn't let them. So i got a new mirror.
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Old 04-24-2003, 04:16 AM   #19 (permalink)
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Nice
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Old 04-24-2003, 04:42 AM   #20 (permalink)
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I like this still. It settles in and motivates.
Thank you
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Old 04-24-2003, 07:55 AM   #21 (permalink)
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to have tried is the biggest reward. Self doubts, unsettled spirits wears one out. Ones future could stand before you now or give more motivations to gain from its meaning...Chaos when understood and controlled is a very powerful function of being alive, It makes you think, do and act...A the day goes on, one at a time.
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Old 04-24-2003, 08:41 AM   #22 (permalink)
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this one's got rogue writ all over it!

Thanks, man.
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Old 04-24-2003, 08:52 AM   #23 (permalink)
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Location: Home
This is interesting. Thanks!
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Old 04-24-2003, 09:19 AM   #24 (permalink)
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Can't help but enjoy a poem that moves me to think...I like the use of free verse in this poem...it makes sense.
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Old 05-08-2003, 09:35 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Fool


Fool

Should I blame myself
Or someone else
Or both
Is what I heard a Lie
Or an Emotion
Or both
Is what we did Real
Or an Act
Or both
Is what we had Actual
Or an Illusion
Or both
Were my emotions Legitimate
Or Delusional
Or both
Was my pain Acknowledged
Or Ignored
Or both
Were my actions Wrong
Or Right on
Or both
Was I your Focus
Or a Distraction
Or both
Was I an Interest
Or a Stepping stone
Or both
Was I Giving
Or Selfish
Or both
Was I a Man
Or a Mouse
Or both

In the end, it didn’t matter
After all, it doesn’t matter
Because the end result is irrelevant, the damage is only to a vague idea.
The heart & soul are only silly play things, they only get in the way.
So put them away, hide them, only children use those toys.
Let it go, do what you need, move on.
Simple, no brainer.
Any Fool can do that.
I can do that too.

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Old 05-08-2003, 11:27 PM   #26 (permalink)
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Wow.... good stuff Rogue. I could feel the emotion, I'm impressed. Do we maybe get to see more soon?
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Old 05-09-2003, 05:17 PM   #27 (permalink)
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Wow, I don't know what to say. Only that I have often wondered some of that myself and you expressed it so well. Your writing is very intense and wonderful. They always say that a picture is worth a thousand words, your poem is no where near a thousand words but to me it is no less expressive as a picture would be.
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Old 05-09-2003, 05:41 PM   #28 (permalink)
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They were all beautiful. I particularly like the second one the best. Love and time, two very hard things to explain. Especially when they affect each other. I also loved the last one. Great work.
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Old 05-09-2003, 08:30 PM   #29 (permalink)
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A familiar feeling.
Wonderful work Rogue...as usual.
Nice to see more of you here.
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Old 05-10-2003, 07:58 AM   #30 (permalink)
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Thank you for the compliments, I'm glad to see I connected with some.
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Old 05-10-2003, 08:05 AM   #31 (permalink)
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I just merged some more of my works together.
Some that had moved to the back.
Eowyn_Vala was kind enought to compliment me on my original collection thread and bump it back up front.
Refering to "dreaming" and "warmth" in the reply.

I just thought it was time for some cleaning and make room for some future works. I hate cluttering up the Lit forum.

If anyone else want to do the same, please just let me or redravin know.

Thanks again for the kind words.

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Old 05-10-2003, 08:36 AM   #32 (permalink)
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I really like the first one
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Old 07-09-2003, 03:45 PM   #33 (permalink)
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More housecleaning.
Just merged in "Fool"
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Old 08-01-2003, 06:32 AM   #34 (permalink)
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Still very touching and beautiful!
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